Tujhey khudaa kahoon, to, budbudaa kahoon kis ko?

by abdbundeli on October 20, 2008, 12:38:30 PM
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Usey khudaa na kahoon, to, khuda kahoon kis ko?
Tujhey khudaa kahoon, to, budbudaa kahoon kis ko?

     Tamaam aasmaan mein, tamaam taarey hain!
     Agar tumhaarey sabhi hain: sabhi hamaarey hain!
     Hawaa hai: baad-e-sabaa ho, ki, tund baade-samoom;
     Khushee ho, gam-ae-mashaqqat ho: do kinaarey hain!!
Yeh bahr-e-zeest hai; paikar mahaz safeenah hai!
Us kaa maqsad naheen maaloom: hamain jeenaa hai!!
     Baad-ae-ishq ho, tahoor baad-ae-nosheen;
     Baad-ae-talkh ho; jo bhi ho, hamain peenaa hai!!
Sard aatish, to, kaheen par hai aatishee paanee;
Saath hain aisey, to, fir, mein judaa kahoon kis ko?            
            Tujhey khudaa kahoon, to, budbudaa kahoon kis ko?
            Usey khudaa na kahoon, to, khuda kahoon kis ko?

     Woh koun hai? Woh kahaan hai? Magar bulaataa hai!
     Khwaab mein, woh naheen aataa, to, koun aataa hai?
     Ab to, haalat hai is dimaag ki, 'abd', aisee:
     Jis ko rakhanaa hai yaad, us ko bhool jaataa hai!!
Ab to, aataa hai maahtaab liye taareekee!
Tasawwuraat ki kaafoor huyee baareeqee!
     Khoob pahichaanaa bhi, anjaanaa nazar aataa hai;
     Roo-b-roo hai panaahgaah sabuksaaree kee!!
Mujh ko, taameer-e-jaw kahaan hai? Bataaye koyee!
Raahabar ko na, to, fir, naakhudaa kahoon kis ko?
           Tujhey khudaa kahoon, to, budbudaa kahoon kis ko?
           Usey khudaa na kahoon, to, khuda kahoon kis ko?
                 
                                      - abd bundeli

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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2008, 03:11:24 PM »
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Bohot achcha aur aala kalaam hai Abd Ji  Applause Applause....kuch words ke meaning zaroor urdu online dictionary main dekhne pade  Feared.
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2008, 06:05:21 PM »
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Celmira ji!
Aap ney taqleef gawaarah ki padhhney ki: shukraguzzar hoon. Lambi nazmeyn enter karney mein bahut deir lagtee hai, iseeliye chaah kar bhi kuchh alfaazon key ma'anee naheen dey paayaa hoon! Mein, isliye hee ab do yaa chaar laayinoun key kalaam hee peish kar paa rahaa hoon! Mua'af keejiyegaa!
                    - abd bundeli

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Deepak Subi
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2008, 06:20:19 PM »
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ye baat aur ki urdu ka mujhse bhi koi nata nahi...
Par aaj kal ghalib ki ghajlo ke siva aur kuchh bhata nahi...

Ye baat aur ke kabhi kabhi ghalib ka kaha kuchh bhi samajh aata nahi...
par Ghalib ko ek bar padhe bina..Chain bhi to aata nahi...


janab gustakhi ke liya muaafi chahunga..par apnii in umda nazmo ke kuchh pechida shabdo ko agar aap hum jaise nou-sikhiye ko samjha de to aap ke shukrgujar honge.....
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«Reply #4 on: October 20, 2008, 08:24:46 PM »
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Celmira ji!
Aap ney taqleef gawaarah ki padhhney ki: shukraguzzar hoon. Lambi nazmeyn enter karney mein bahut deir lagtee hai, iseeliye chaah kar bhi kuchh alfaazon key ma'anee naheen dey paayaa hoon! Mein, isliye hee ab do yaa chaar laayinoun key kalaam hee peish kar paa rahaa hoon! Mua'af keejiyegaa!
                    - abd bundeli



Its my pleasure Abd Ji  notworthy Aapke 2/4 liners bhi khoob maza dete hain.... Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 21, 2008, 02:42:25 AM »
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Shukriyah Celmira ji!
Yeh to aapki nazar-e-inaayat hai, ki, aap meyree shaayari mein kuchh na kuchh talash hi leytey hain, warnah mein hoon to kuchh bhi naheen!
            - abd bundeli

Deepak Subi ji,
Mein aap ki har farmaaish ko sir-aankhoun par loongaa! Shukriyah!
                                       - abd bundeli
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2008, 10:33:17 AM »
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Jitna samajh mein aaya samajha
Joh na samjha to us se uljha
Urdu sabdkosh ka liya hai sahara
Kyon ki urdu gyan kum hai hamara


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abdbundeli
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«Reply #7 on: October 21, 2008, 11:30:41 AM »
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Rajesh Harish ji!
Yeh nazm, mein ney saaloun pahiley likhee thee! Nigaah mein aa gayi, to enter kar dee! Ab, meyree koshish rahtee hai, ki, 'aprachalit' alfaaz kaa kam sey kam isteymaal ho! Mein bhi bahut hi kam Urdu jaantaa hoon!


Wo bhi meyrey paas hain,
Mein bhi un key paas!
Is par bhi, ham door hain;
Man hai bahut udaas!!

     - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli       
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«Reply #8 on: October 21, 2008, 09:52:07 PM »
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Aapne to jaise dil ki baat keh di, Abd Ji Applause

Dekhoon tumko, chhu na paaoon,
Kaise iss dil ko samjhaaoon !!
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2008, 05:05:21 AM »
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Celmira ji,
Na to chhoo paataa hoon us ko, na deykh paataa hoon!
Woh to aataa hi naheen, baarhaa bulaataa hoon!

                           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2008, 07:20:32 AM »
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Rajesh Harish ji!
Yeh nazm, mein ney saaloun pahiley likhee thee! Nigaah mein aa gayi, to enter kar dee! Ab, meyree koshish rahtee hai, ki, 'aprachalit' alfaaz kaa kam sey kam isteymaal ho! Mein bhi bahut hi kam Urdu jaantaa hoon!


Wo bhi meyrey paas hain,
Mein bhi un key paas!
Is par bhi, ham door hain;
Man hai bahut udaas!!

     - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli       
Thanx Abd Ji
Yeh bhi achchi likhi
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2008, 07:36:34 AM »
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Thanks Rajesh Harish ji!
           - abd bundeli
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: October 22, 2008, 01:14:10 PM »
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Celmira ji,
Na to chhoo paataa hoon us ko, na deykh paataa hoon!
Woh to aataa hi naheen, baarhaa bulaataa hoon!

                           - abd bundeli

Laut kar aate nahin phir, dil se jaane waale,
Nahin pahunchti hai awaaz, kitna hi dil pukaare
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«Reply #13 on: October 22, 2008, 03:02:47 PM »
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Celmira ji!
Lout paatey naheen, uthh kar wahaan jaaney waaley!
Dard kitnaa bhi koyi zehn-o-jigar mein paaley!
Yoon to, hotey hain yaheen paas hawaaoun mein kaheen:
Uyoon-e-nou ko bhi parhtey hain nazar key laaley!!

                             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #14 on: October 23, 2008, 12:54:33 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Abd Ji

Humne bhi intezaar ki shama bujhaai hai
Samjhaya dil ko jaane waala harjaai hai
Phir bhi dil hai, machal jaata hai kabhi
Laakh samjhaya, na baat samajh aayi hai !!
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