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poochhti thi tum kabhi mujhe kya tohfa main du tumhe,
muskuraake kaha tha maine mera tofha to tum hi ho,

ek tumhaara masoom se chehra ek tumhaari aankhen hain,
isse pyaara kuch bhi nahi, tum mujhe sabse pyaari ho,

poochti thi tum mujhe kya karoge is tohfe ka tum,
hanske tumhe ye kehta tha ki tum hi meri ibaadat ho,

poojta hoon main tumhe, chaahta hoon bas tumhe,
tum hi meri aarzoo ho, tum hi meri archana ho,

aankhen band kar lu agar main saamne bas tum hi ho,
unko agar main khol lu to dikhte bas mujhe tum hi ho,

likhta hoon jo kuch bhi main, har jagah bas tum hi ho,
tum hi har ghazal ho meri, tum hi meri har kahaani ho,

poochti thi tum mujhe kyun itna pyaar mujhe karte ho,
kya kahun tumse main jaana sab kuch mera bas tum hi ho...


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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2010, 02:28:45 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2010, 02:34:25 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2010, 02:39:16 PM »
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Wow hamesha ki tarah bahut khoobsurti se likha aapne Kapil ji.mindblowing creation. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2010, 03:19:09 PM »
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Wah kia masoom ahsaas hai janaab bahut pyaara likha hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause

Magroor meri JaaN itna na hua karo
Haske bola karo jab tum mila karo
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2010, 03:57:15 PM »
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bahut khoob kapil ji massom se zazbaat ache se likhe hain.
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 kya koi itna chahta kisi ko aajkal to aapse hi pata chala haan kyun nahin.ho sakta hai.



poochhti thi tum kabhi mujhe kya tohfa main du tumhe,
muskuraake kaha tha maine mera tofha to tum hi ho,

ek tumhaara masoom se chehra ek tumhaari aankhen hain,
isse pyaara kuch bhi nahi, tum mujhe sabse pyaari ho,

poochti thi tum mujhe kya karoge is tohfe ka tum,
hanske tumhe ye kehta tha ki tum hi meri ibaadat ho,

poojta hoon main tumhe, chaahta hoon bas tumhe,
tum hi meri aarzoo ho, tum hi meri archana ho,

aankhen band kar lu agar main saamne bas tum hi ho,
unko agar main khol lu to dikhte bas mujhe tum hi ho,

likhta hoon jo kuch bhi main, har jagah bas tum hi ho,
tum hi har ghazal ho meri, tum hi meri har kahaani ho,

poochti thi tum mujhe kyun itna pyaar mujhe karte ho,
kya kahun tumse main jaana sab kuch mera bas tum hi ho...


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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2010, 04:21:28 PM »
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likhna to hai kuch par isswaqt to man me bas aapke shabd gunj rahe hain...age kya likhun....soch rahi hun....

itni pyari kavita hai ye aapki k iska reply to dena hi hai...par sach me kuch sujh hi nahin raha...

bhttttttttttttt dilkash andaz me likhi hai aapne ye kavita klaskar ji....mastammmm
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2010, 04:33:58 PM »
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koshish ki hai kuch likhna ki pata nahin kaisi likhi gai hai..


Mere dil me basi jo pyaar ki tasveer tum hi ho
Mere rom rom me machalti masti tumhi ho

Jise dekh jaag jati hai meri angdaiyan
Wo mere tan man me bajti jal tarang tum hi ho

Aankhen tumhi ho inme palte sapne tumhi ho
Meri dhadkan me chalta sangeet tum hi ho

Jiske karan khanakti hain meri chudiyan
Wo mera jeewan shringaar tum hi ho…!!!

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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2010, 10:02:05 PM »
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   Realy nice thought Kapil ji, Just simple n sweet. icon_thumleft icon_thumleft
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2010, 06:22:10 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Devangi ji..!!!

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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2010, 06:22:38 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Wow hamesha ki tarah bahut khoobsurti se likha aapne Kapil ji.mindblowing creation. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2010, 06:23:59 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz ji... aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

Wah kia masoom ahsaas hai janaab bahut pyaara likha hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause

Magroor meri JaaN itna na hua karo
Haske bola karo jab tum mila karo
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«Reply #13 on: August 07, 2010, 06:26:19 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Suresh ji... jo aapne apna waqt diya , padha aur ise pasand kiya... haan sach kahaa aapne aajkal mohabbt ki koi kadar hi nahi hai.. chaahne waala kisi ko sab rishton se badh ke chahta hai par uske chaahat ki koi kadar hi nahi hoti... bahut kam log hote hain is jahaan me jinka pyaara poora hota hai... !!!

bahut khoob kapil ji massom se zazbaat ache se likhe hain.
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«Reply #14 on: August 07, 2010, 06:29:07 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... aapne meri kavita ki uski aukaat se badh ke taarif kar di.... shayad utni achchi thi nahi meri rachna par aapke taarif ke is khoobsurat andaaz se meri kavita ki khoobsurti ko chaar chaand lag gaye hain... main tahe dil se aapka shukriyaa adaa karta hoon Kasak ji...!!!

likhna to hai kuch par isswaqt to man me bas aapke shabd gunj rahe hain...age kya likhun....soch rahi hun....

itni pyari kavita hai ye aapki k iska reply to dena hi hai...par sach me kuch sujh hi nahin raha...

bhttttttttttttt dilkash andaz me likhi hai aapne ye kavita klaskar ji....mastammmm

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