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Tumhari yaad dilaanay lagay hen sheher k log
Dasht men chhor k jaanay lagay hen sheher k log
Main apnay aap par hansnay laga hoon jis din say
Mera mazaaq uraanay lagay hen sheher k log
Wo jis ko “ishq” kaha kartay thay duniyaa waalay
Annaa ki bheent charhaanay lagay hen sheher k log
Meray wo geet jo likay thay kabhi teray liyay
Mujhay he aa k sunaanay lagay hen sheher k log
Meray wajood ki dam-torti nigaahon say
Fasurda khaab churaanay lagay hen sheher k log
Tumhari yaad dilaanay lagay hen sheher k log
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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2012, 04:18:29 PM » |
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: October 17, 2012, 07:58:20 PM » |
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Tumhari yaad dilaanay lagay hen sheher k log
Dasht men chhor k jaanay lagay hen sheher k log
Main apnay aap par hansnay laga hoon jis din say
Mera mazaaq uraanay lagay hen sheher k log
Wo jis ko “ishq” kaha kartay thay duniyaa waalay
Annaa ki bheent charhaanay lagay hen sheher k log
Meray wo geet jo likay thay kabhi teray liyay
Mujhay he aa k sunaanay lagay hen sheher k log
Meray wajood ki dam-torti nigaahon say
Fasurda khaab churaanay lagay hen sheher k log
Tumhari yaad dilaanay lagay hen sheher k log
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«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2012, 12:31:10 AM » |
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2012, 08:54:11 AM » |
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Shukriya aap sub ka...
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«Reply #11 on: October 18, 2012, 10:58:18 AM » |
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VB ji.......... aaap ka likha padhne mil jaye to aisa lagta hai rooh ko manpasand khana mil gaya ho......
lovely post ji....
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«Reply #12 on: October 18, 2012, 11:23:35 AM » |
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vimmi singh jee shukriya aap ka...
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«Reply #13 on: October 18, 2012, 11:24:23 AM » |
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki jee!
ab kya likhna tu kya parhna hay.. bus
aisay he...
thanx for comments
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«Reply #14 on: October 18, 2012, 11:48:37 AM » |
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kya VB ji.... aap bhi.... itne din baad mile aur fir wahi dukhi aatmaa wali baat kar di na aapne..... khush hona chahiye na aapko ...
koi nahin bht din se humse bahas nahin hui na aapki isiliye aise ho agye hain aap.....
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on eTI community..
