UDAAN...........(ambu)

by ambalika sharma on August 18, 2014, 04:59:28 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 19, 2014, 09:20:44 AM »
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«Reply #16 on: August 19, 2014, 09:21:00 AM »
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UDAAN

Khaabon ko ek udan chahiye,
Har parinde ko aasman chahiye,

Har dil ki hasrat hai aazadi,
Hai hosle ko mukaam chahiye.

Mat roko in badte kadmo ko,
Mat thamo ubalte jazbon ko,
Har koshish ko  jubaan chahiye.

Kb tk bandhe rakhoge,
Har hasrat ko ek parvaan chahiye.

Bulandiyan mil jati hai aksar,
Ek chota sa paidan chahiye.

Har koi hasil kr sakta hai kamyabi,
Bs iradon me jaan chahiye....



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Ambika ji Bahut Khubsurat Likha Hai.
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«Reply #17 on: August 19, 2014, 12:17:20 PM »
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bahut khoob
shukriy nand ji
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«Reply #18 on: August 19, 2014, 12:19:17 PM »
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Ambu Jee Aadaab...!

Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob bade hi khoobsurat khayaaloN ko khoob lafz diye haiN aapne...

Kafi umdaa khayaal rahe ... Hume yeH quoted sher behad khoob lage... In khoob sher par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji....mujhe khushi hui apko meri likhi baatein pasand aayi.
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«Reply #19 on: August 19, 2014, 12:20:06 PM »
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bahut khub ambuji
bahut bahut shukriya apka
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«Reply #20 on: August 19, 2014, 12:21:18 PM »
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Ambika ji Bahut Khubsurat Likha Hai.
thank u sir for your appreciation.....glad u liked my writing
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«Reply #21 on: August 19, 2014, 03:31:53 PM »
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UDAAN

Khaabon ko ek udan chahiye,
Har parinde ko aasman chahiye,

Har dil ki hasrat hai aazadi,
Hai hosle ko mukaam chahiye.

Mat roko in badte kadmo ko,
Mat thamo ubalte jazbon ko,
Har koshish ko  jubaan chahiye.

Kb tk bandhe rakhoge,
Har hasrat ko ek parvaan chahiye.

Bulandiyan mil jati hai aksar,
Ek chota sa paidan chahiye.

Har koi hasil kr sakta hai kamyabi,
Bs iradon me jaan chahiye....




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«Reply #22 on: August 19, 2014, 04:50:15 PM »
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«Reply #23 on: August 20, 2014, 06:28:13 PM »
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beautiful.....!!!
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beautiful.....!!!

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