UDAAN

by naxen on March 13, 2012, 02:08:17 PM
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Maa ke aanchal mein bohot jee liya,
abhi is duniya mein meri ek pehchaan baki hai.
Doston ka sath mile na mile,
unke sath guzri har shaam ki yaad baki hai.
Teri palkon ka saaya mere sath nahi toh kya,
teri aankhon se behte ashkon ka ehsas baki hai.
Dar dar ke kab tak apne shabdon ko dabaun,
kaamyabi ki mehfil mein abhi meri ek shaam baki hai.
Aur
Main toh parinda hun kis had tak rokoge mujhe,
mere pairon mein kaamyabi ki UDAAN baki hai...
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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2012, 02:46:36 PM »
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Maa ke aanchal mein bohot jee liya,
abhi is duniya mein meri ek pehchaan baki hai.
Doston ka sath mile na mile,
unke sath guzri har shaam ki yaad baki hai.
Teri palkon ka saaya mere sath nahi toh kya,
teri aankhon se behte ashkon ka ehsas baki hai.
Dar dar ke kab tak apne shabdon ko dabaun,
kaamyabi ki mehfil mein abhi meri ek shaam baki hai.
Aur
Main toh parinda hun kis had tak rokoge mujhe,
mere pairon mein kaamyabi ki UDAAN baki hai...


Bahut Khoooob Par Naxen ji Jo Sukoon Maa Ke Aanchal mein Hai, Woh Duniya Mein kahee Nahi..haan Apni Pehchaan Zaroor banaye Par maa Ke Aanchal ka Saath Kabhi Naa Chuhte.. icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2012, 04:17:10 PM »
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bahut khoob naxen ji... Usual Smile

welcome to yoindia... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2012, 04:41:12 PM »
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Nice .Naxenji,welcome to Yoindia Shayariadab.Aghaaz achha hai.Oonchi udaan ke liye shubh kaamnayein.Hasan
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«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2012, 04:51:50 PM »
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Good one. keep writing
u r lucky enough to get the blessing of Khwaish ji & Hasan Sir
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«Reply #5 on: March 14, 2012, 04:24:33 AM »
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very nice most welcome
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«Reply #6 on: March 14, 2012, 01:09:26 PM »
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Maa ke aanchal mein bohot jee liya,
abhi is duniya mein meri ek pehchaan baki hai.
Doston ka sath mile na mile,
unke sath guzri har shaam ki yaad baki hai.
Teri palkon ka saaya mere sath nahi toh kya,
teri aankhon se behte ashkon ka ehsas baki hai.
Dar dar ke kab tak apne shabdon ko dabaun,
kaamyabi ki mehfil mein abhi meri ek shaam baki hai.
Aur
Main toh parinda hun kis had tak rokoge mujhe,
mere pairon mein kaamyabi ki UDAAN baki hai...


bahut shandaar udaan ka jazba hai ...!
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«Reply #7 on: March 15, 2012, 02:53:31 AM »
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nice sharingg janaaab--

maa ke aanchal sa nhi sukun kahin
dhoond kr dekhe koi to jaane swarg ka sukh to basta hai yahin--

welcome to Yoindia Shayariadab dear
be happy
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