UMMED............A.B

by adil bechain on March 09, 2011, 07:48:00 PM
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                     TOOTE KHAWABO KO TANHAI NE SAMBHALA HAI,
                      UNKE ZULM KA ANDAZ BADAA NIRALA HAI,

                  
                      DIKHAYA SABZ BAAGH MUJHE SEHRA MEIN LAKAR,
                      KHANE MEIN AAJ SOOKHI ROTI KA NIWALA HAI,


                      GAMM MEIN DOOBA RAHA SUBH-O-SHAM YE GHARIB,
                      HAATH MEIN USKE SIRF UMMED KA PYALA HAI,

 
                      LOOTA THA JISNE ASMAT KABHI MAA KI APNI,
                      ABLAAON KA AAJ WO BANA RAKHWALA HAI,


                      MILAYA THA ZAHAR KABHI MERE RISHTE MEIN BECHAIN..!
                      WO SHAKHS AAJ BAHUT NASEEBWALA HAI.


                      

                      
                      
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2011, 04:21:56 AM »
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aadil bhai bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2011, 11:50:07 AM »
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Quote from: kishan8888 on March 10, 2011, 04:21:56 AM
aadil bhai bahut khoob

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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2011, 12:01:31 PM »
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bahot khub adil sahab...........sidha dil me samata hua kalaam he apka.........behtareen peshkash ......
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2011, 12:12:28 PM »
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Adil ji Bechainee mai mai aap bahut
alag alag rang bhar gaye ek he kavita mai....
Kahaan tou Mashuka se shikaayat kar rahe they
aur kahaan maa ki asmat tak pahunch gaye.....

Tere khayaalon mai badi ajeeb si bhatkan lagti hai mujhko
Pyaar karte karte khanjar chalaane ki lat lagti hai tujhko.....


Quote from: adil bechain on March 09, 2011, 07:48:00 PM
                      TOOTE KHAWABO KO TANHAI NE SAMBHALA HAI,
                      UNKE ZULM KA ANDAZ BADAA NIRALA HAI,

                   
                      DIKHAYA SABZ BAAGH MUJHE SEHRA MEIN LAKAR,
                      KHANE MEIN AAJ SOOKHI ROTI KA NIWALA HAI,


                      GAMM MEIN DOOBA RAHA SUBH-O-SHAM YE GHARIB,
                      HAATH MEIN USKE SIRF UMMED KA PYALA HAI,

 
                      LOOTA THA JISNE ASMAT KABHI APNI MAA KI,
                      ABLAAON KA AAJ WO BANA RAKHWALA HAI,


                      MILAYA THA ZAHAR KABHI MERE RISHTE MEIN BECHAIN..!
                      WO SHAKHS AAJ BAHUT NASEEBWALA HAI.


                     

                     
                     
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2011, 12:21:49 PM »
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Bahut Bhaut Khoob Adilji..Her sher ki apni geraai hai..

bahut AChe Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: March 11, 2011, 03:19:26 PM »
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bahot khub adil sahab...........sidha dil me samata hua kalaam he apka.........behtareen peshkash ......

THANK YOU MATRIX GUY
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«Reply #7 on: March 11, 2011, 03:20:20 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on March 10, 2011, 12:12:28 PM
Adil ji Bechainee mai mai aap bahut
alag alag rang bhar gaye ek he kavita mai....
Kahaan tou Mashuka se shikaayat kar rahe they
aur kahaan maa ki asmat tak pahunch gaye.....

Tere khayaalon mai badi ajeeb si bhatkan lagti hai mujhko
Pyaar karte karte khanjar chalaane ki lat lagti hai tujhko.....



KYA KHOOB KAHA KOYAL JI
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«Reply #8 on: March 13, 2011, 01:02:10 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 10, 2011, 12:21:49 PM
Bahut Bhaut Khoob Adilji..Her sher ki apni geraai hai..

bahut AChe Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thank you khawahish sahab
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