**Unhone acha nahin kiya**

by dead heart on May 17, 2009, 10:33:09 AM
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Mujhe chorr kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Meri saanson ko torr kar unhon acha nahin kiya,
Unke bagair bhi zinda rehjaunga main magar,
Uske dil se mere dil ko juda kar kar unhone acha nahin kiya...

Mere pyar par bewaffai ka daag laga kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Mere dil ko zinda dafna kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Waise toh kabhi kabhi muskura leta hoon magar,
Meri rooh ko rula kar unhone acha nahin kiya...

Meri parchai ko mita kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Meri zindagi ko kabrastan bana kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Shikayat nahin kar raha hai unse Rahim magar,
Mujhe ek "dafan dil" bana kar unhone acha nahin kiya...


                 
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«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2009, 12:27:17 PM »
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Mujhe chorr kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Meri saanson ko torr kar unhon acha nahin kiya,
Unke bagair bhi zinda rehjaunga main magar,
Uske dil se mere dil ko juda kar kar unhone acha nahin kiya...

Mere pyar par bewaffai ka daag laga kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Mere dil ko zinda dafna kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Waise toh kabhi kabhi muskura leta hoon magar,
Meri rooh ko rula kar unhone acha nahin kiya...

Meri parchai ko mita kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Meri zindagi ko kabrastan bana kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Shikayat nahin kar raha hai unse Rahim magar,
Mujhe ek "dafan dil" bana kar unhone acha nahin kiya...
        

Aapne bahut accha likha hai Rahim... Applause
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2009, 02:03:54 PM »
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Wah DH.. bada diljala kalam likha hain bohat khoob....
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2009, 07:11:00 PM »
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Shukriya Roja di aur Ghayel Saheb...Jab dil jala hi hai toh diljala hi kalam niklega nah???
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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2009, 01:24:05 AM »
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very nice and beautiful dead heart ji.
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2009, 05:14:06 AM »
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Mujhe chorr kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Meri saanson ko torr kar unhon acha nahin kiya,
Unke bagair bhi zinda rehjaunga main magar,
Uske dil se mere dil ko juda kar kar unhone acha nahin kiya...

Mere pyar par bewaffai ka daag laga kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Mere dil ko zinda dafna kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Waise toh kabhi kabhi muskura leta hoon magar,
Meri rooh ko rula kar unhone acha nahin kiya...

Meri parchai ko mita kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Meri zindagi ko kabrastan bana kar unhone acha nahin kiya,
Shikayat nahin kar raha hai unse Rahim magar,
Mujhe ek "dafan dil" bana kar unhone acha nahin kiya...


                


MEREY DIL KO ZINDA DAFNAA KAR USNEY ACHCHA......WAAH ...DH
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2009, 06:47:07 PM »
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Shukriya Madhuwesh jee aur KA jee
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2009, 07:20:41 PM »
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Waah Mere Bhai Kya KHoob Likha Hai, Har Sher Mashallah Dil Choo Raha Hai,.
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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2009, 07:32:07 PM »
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Shukriya Azeem bhaijan...Hum toh apki shayri ke kadradaan hai aur apse tarif pana wakei dil khush karta hai...
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