Unke saaath janat sa jeene ka mazaa agyaa ....bansi

by BANSI DHAMEJA on September 02, 2012, 05:48:17 PM
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Kal raat sote sote unka khayaal aa gayaa
Sochte sochte neend ke aagosh men kho gaya

Achanak se unka chahra saamne aa gayaa
Nazar se nazar milee aur dil ko karaar aa gayaa

Ishaaron ka ishaaron se jawab aa gayeaa
Pyaari ki nazar ka jawab pyaar se aa gayaa

Thar thraaye honth aur thartharate hi rah gaye
Bina kuchh zubaan se kahe sab samajh aa gayaa

Unke saaath janat sa jeene ka mazaa agyaa
Lag raha tha waqt jahaan hai waheen thahar gayaa

Neend khulne ke baad bhi khoyaa khayalon men rahaa
Bahut der tak sochta rahaa kiyon main jag gayaa
Jaagne se neend ka mazaa chalaa  gayaa

‘bansi’ Kal raat sote sote unka khayaal aa gayaa
Unke saaath janat sa jeene ka mazaa agyaa
------bansi dhameja(madhur)



 

 


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«Reply #1 on: September 02, 2012, 06:01:25 PM »
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Bahut badhiya likha hai Bansi jee.
is baar bhi naya khayaal...wah wah
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«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2012, 06:11:23 PM »
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mukesh ji

is nacheez ko itna sab to aata na tha
lagta hai yeh sab aap doston ka kamaal hai

aap doston ka itna achha likha parh kar
man men kuchhh kuchh khayal aa jate hai

bas yoo hi kuchh kuchh likh deta hoon
aur na jane kiyoon aap ko achha lagta hai

SHUKRIYA MUKESH JI
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2012, 01:20:44 AM »
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bahut khoob bansi ji
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2012, 02:46:46 AM »
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bahut khoob bahut badhiya.....

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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2012, 03:47:40 AM »
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bahut khoob bansi ji
nandbandhu ji shukriya
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bahut khoob bahut badhiya.....

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soudagar ji hausila afzahi ke liye shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2012, 04:48:25 AM »
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hirday ji shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2012, 10:25:25 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2012, 12:34:20 PM »
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good
saini ji thanks
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