wo ake taaraa (by vb)

by vb on September 12, 2011, 08:56:05 AM
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Ujaar basti k aasmaan par
Wo ake taara chamak raha hay
Thakaa nahi raat ka musaafir
Na-jaanay kab say bhatak raha hay

Na-jaanay kitnay he saal beetay
Makeen yahan k chalay gayay hain
Hava k rukh par ye urtay patay
Kai dinon say thakay huvay hain

Shikasta yaadon k kaaghzon par
Sufaid lamhon main rang bharta
Khumaar-e-hasrat men geet likh kar
Ghubaar-e-furqat k naam karta
Bus ake tanhaa sa ajnabi sa
Udaas shaair gaya nahi tha
Magar ye tay hay k qaafly men
Koi tu tha jo rukaa nahi tha

Gali gali ab sadaain day kar
Pukaarta hay gayay dinon ko
Wo kaafla kab ka ja chukaa hay
Sadaaen deta hay raaston ko

Udaasiyon ki rafaaqaton say
Har ake gosha mehek raha hay
Ujaar basti k aasmaan par
Wo ake taara chamak raha hay


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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2011, 09:50:48 AM »
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Ujaar basti k aasmaan par
Wo ake taara chamak raha hay
Thakaa nahi raat ka musaafir
Na-jaanay kab say bhatak raha hay

Na-jaanay kitnay he saal beetay
Makeen yahan k chalay gayay hain
Hava k rukh par ye urtay patay
Kai dinon say thakay huvay hain

Shikasta yaadon k kaaghzon par
Sufaid lamhon main rang bharta
Khumaar-e-hasrat men geet likh kar
Ghubaar-e-furqat k naam karta
Bus ake tanhaa sa ajnabi sa
Udaas shaair gaya nahi tha
Magar ye tay hay k qaafly men
Koi tu tha jo rukaa nahi tha

Gali gali ab sadaain day kar
Pukaarta hay gayay dinon ko
Wo kaafla kab ka ja chukaa hay
Sadaaen deta hay raaston ko

Udaasiyon ki rafaaqaton say
Har ake gosha mehek raha hay
Ujaar basti k aasmaan par
Wo ake taara chamak raha hay


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bahut bahut bahut khoob VB JI
. EK GHUZARISH HAI. AAP LIKHTE BAHUT ACHCHA HAI SIRF APNE FONT KO CHOTA KAR LEIN TO PADHNE MEIN ASAANI HOGI
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«Reply #2 on: November 21, 2011, 06:42:45 AM »
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Sheba jee!

aap ki bay-jaa taareef aur ba-jaa comments ka shukriya...

baray font say yaqeenan hamaari aur hamaray naam-nihaad geeton ki auqaat bari nahi ho jaati... faqat is liyay bara font use kartay rahay k is ujaar basti say kisi ka guzar ho, to usay koi mushkil na uthaani paray... parhnay men aasaani ho...

apnay likhay ko, apni aur in ki auqat jitna chhota tu nahi kar paain gay... k itna chhota parha nahi jaa sakay ga... lekin aap k mashvaray k baad default font istemaal karen gay...

aap ki comments ka ake baar phir.. shukriya...

vb
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2012, 01:54:20 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Vb ji....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2012, 11:15:42 PM »
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Ujaar basti k aasmaan par
Wo ake taara chamak raha hay
Thakaa nahi raat ka musaafir
Na-jaanay kab say bhatak raha hay

Na-jaanay kitnay he saal beetay
Makeen yahan k chalay gayay hain
Hava k rukh par ye urtay patay
Kai dinon say thakay huvay hain]

Bahut khoob.. esp about lines very very good. Keep coming... VB ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2012, 05:01:45 AM »
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wahhhhhhhhhhhh aaj kitne din baad VB ji ka likha padhne ka naseeb hua....... bhttttttttttt mastam mast likha hai aapne vb ji.....
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«Reply #6 on: June 08, 2012, 08:51:53 AM »
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sarahnay ka shukriya...
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