~*~ Woh bachpan kay dinn ~*~ by Rahim

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Doston Salaam..

Kal ek hospital main gaya tha..Wahan ek nanhi bachi ko dekh dil kuch bol parra..
Kuch purani yaadein ankhon kay samne ek film banke gumne lagi..Jaise kay kal hi
ki baat ho kay main high school main, ek group tha..Bahaut kuch yaad agaya..
Bas inhi yaadon ko qaid kar raha hoon..Hospital kay woh bench par baithe baithe
hi yeh nazm likh gaya..

Sorry thorri zada lengthy hogayi hai..

Nanhe kadmon ko dekh dil keh utha,
Woh bachpan kay dinn bahaut yaad ate hai..

Kabhi maa kay ankhon se duniya dekhte the,
Aj toh maa kay saath chalne main hum sharmate hai..

Lakdi ki kati, kati pe gorra, yehi tha zuban pe rata hua,
Aj iss geet ko chorr hum baki sab kuch gungunate hai..

Woh baarish kay pani main kagaz ki kashti ki race lagana,
Aj hum uss nadani se waisi kashti bhi nahin bana pate hai..

Woh doston kay saath baarish main bheegna aur phir chayi peena,
‘aj kama loun, kal aish karunga’, aj bas yehi kehke khud ko behlate hai..

‘oye hoye kal pura lesson usse tu dekh raha tha, ehm ehm kya baat hai’,
Aj iss andaaz se apne doston ko hum chida bhi nahin pate hai..

Woh school ki bell jo ishara thi kay cricket khelne ka samay hogaya,
Cricket toh aj bhi hota hai mager woh bell ab sun nahin pate hai..

Waqt kay saath sab kuch hi badal gaya na ‘Khamosh’,
Tujse pyaar karne wala tere saath na raha, teri muskurahat na rahi,
Doston, likhta toh kal bhi tha, aj bhi likhta hoon, mager,
Najane kyun ab mohobat par mohobat se nahin likh pate hai..

Ae Khuda, ek baar mujhe woh daur dobara jeene de,
Ek dusre ka bag chupana, ek dusre ko khatein likhna,
Library main amne samne baith nazrein milana, raaton ko text karna,
Sach kehta hai ‘Khamosh’, woh high school kay dinn bahaut bahaut yaad ate hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2011, 08:27:22 PM »
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Doston Salaam..

Kal ek hospital main gaya tha..Wahan ek nanhi bachi ko dekh dil kuch bol parra..
Kuch purani yaadein ankhon kay samne ek film banke gumne lagi..Jaise kay kal hi
ki baat ho kay main high school main, ek group tha..Bahaut kuch yaad agaya..
Bas inhi yaadon ko qaid kar raha hoon..Hospital kay woh bench par baithe baithe
hi yeh nazm likh gaya..

Sorry thorri zada lengthy hogayi hai..

Nanhe kadmon ko dekh dil keh utha,
Woh bachpan kay dinn bahaut yaad ate hai..

Kabhi maa kay ankhon se duniya dekhte the,
Aj toh maa kay saath chalne main hum sharmate hai..

Lakdi ki kati, kati pe gorra, yehi tha zuban pe rata hua,
Aj iss geet ko chorr hum baki sab kuch gungunate hai..

Woh baarish kay pani main kagaz ki kashti ki race lagana,
Aj hum uss nadani se waisi kashti bhi nahin bana pate hai..

Woh doston kay saath baarish main bheegna aur phir chayi peena,
‘aj kama loun, kal aish karunga’, aj bas yehi kehke khud ko behlate hai..

‘oye hoye kal pura lesson usse tu dekh raha tha, ehm ehm kya baat hai’,
Aj iss andaaz se apne doston ko hum chida bhi nahin pate hai..

Woh school ki bell jo ishara thi kay cricket khelne ka samay hogaya,
Cricket toh aj bhi hota hai mager woh bell ab sun nahin pate hai..

Waqt kay saath sab kuch hi badal gaya na ‘Khamosh’,
Tujse pyaar karne wala tere saath na raha, teri muskurahat na rahi,
Doston, likhta toh kal bhi tha, aj bhi likhta hoon, mager,
Najane kyun ab mohobat par mohobat se nahin likh pate hai..

Ae Khuda, ek baar mujhe woh daur dobara jeene de,
Ek dusre ka bag chupana, ek dusre ko khatein likhna,
Library main amne samne baith nazrein milana, raaton ko text karna,
Sach kehta hai ‘Khamosh’, woh high school kay dinn bahaut bahaut yaad ate hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

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Waah Waah Waah!!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!

Aisa bahut Kam Hota Hai Ke Aap Koi Nazm Padhte Ho Aur kab Woh Nazm Poori Ho jaaye Pata Hi nahi chalta..Mere Dost Vakaai Dil Lubha Gayi Yeh nazm Aapki..Bahut Hi Khoobsurti se Beete Dino Ko Lafzon mein Utaara Hai..Bahut Ache
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2011, 08:30:44 PM »
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rahim ji......

khwaish ji ne kah hi diya jo muje kahna tha.....

sach bachpan ke din bahot yaad aatey he..........na tnsn.na fikrrr....na koi jimeedari....bas masti me raho.....school......khelna.....gumna idher udher....ohh god sab ankho ke samne gumna......aur ha ek baat aur jagde karna....ye to mera khas time spent karne ka jariya tha. Winking Winking.....maja aa gaya rahim ji .....dil khush ho gaya sab padkar
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2011, 09:22:45 PM »
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kuch hai nhi kahne ko dost.
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Waah Waah Waah!!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!

Aisa bahut Kam Hota Hai Ke Aap Koi Nazm Padhte Ho Aur kab Woh Nazm Poori Ho jaaye Pata Hi nahi chalta..Mere Dost Vakaai Dil Lubha Gayi Yeh nazm Aapki..Bahut Hi Khoobsurti se Beete Dino Ko Lafzon mein Utaara Hai..Bahut Ache

Teh teh dil se shukriya Khwaish Dost..
Itni lengthy nazm aur parrte parrte pata nahin chala apko
kay kab khatam hogayi, toh yeh mere liye ek behad bada compliment hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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rahim ji......

khwaish ji ne kah hi diya jo muje kahna tha.....

sach bachpan ke din bahot yaad aatey he..........na tnsn.na fikrrr....na koi jimeedari....bas masti me raho.....school......khelna.....gumna idher udher....ohh god sab ankho ke samne gumna......aur ha ek baat aur jagde karna....ye to mera khas time spent karne ka jariya tha. Winking Winking.....maja aa gaya rahim ji .....dil khush ho gaya sab padkar
Utkarsh bhai, bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Wakei bahaut jazbaton se bharne ki koshish ki thi maine..
Bachpan sabhi ko pyara hota hai..
Haan woh meethe meethe jagde..
Bahaut shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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kuch hai nhi kahne ko dost.

Bahaut kuch kehgaye ap dost..
bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2011, 11:09:12 AM »
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bht khoob rahim...
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bht khoob rahim...
Shukriya Priya di..
Khush rahiye..!
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mene to kuch bhi nahi kaha--
fir kaafi kuch kya kaha mene!!
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«Reply #10 on: March 02, 2011, 07:38:54 PM »
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Nanhe kadmon ko dekh dil keh utha,
Woh bachpan kay dinn bahaut yaad ate hai..

Kabhi maa kay ankhon se duniya dekhte the,
Aj toh maa kay saath chalne main hum sharmate hai..

Lakdi ki kati, kati pe gorra, yehi tha zuban pe rata hua,
Aj iss geet ko chorr hum baki sab kuch gungunate hai..

Woh baarish kay pani main kagaz ki kashti ki race lagana,
Aj hum uss nadani se waisi kashti bhi nahin bana pate hai..

Woh doston kay saath baarish main bheegna aur phir chayi peena,
‘aj kama loun, kal aish karunga’, aj bas yehi kehke khud ko behlate hai..

‘oye hoye kal pura lesson usse tu dekh raha tha, ehm ehm kya baat hai’,
Aj iss andaaz se apne doston ko hum chida bhi nahin pate hai..

Woh school ki bell jo ishara thi kay cricket khelne ka samay hogaya,
Cricket toh aj bhi hota hai mager woh bell ab sun nahin pate hai..

Waqt kay saath sab kuch hi badal gaya na ‘Khamosh’,
Tujse pyaar karne wala tere saath na raha, teri muskurahat na rahi,
Doston, likhta toh kal bhi tha, aj bhi likhta hoon, mager,
Najane kyun ab mohobat par mohobat se nahin likh pate hai..

Ae Khuda, ek baar mujhe woh daur dobara jeene de,
Ek dusre ka bag chupana, ek dusre ko khatein likhna,
Library main amne samne baith nazrein milana, raaton ko text karna,
Sach kehta hai ‘Khamosh’, woh high school kay dinn bahaut bahaut yaad ate hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Awesome !!! Creation ....... Rahim Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... !  Applause Applause Applause

aise hi asardaar shayri karte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...!

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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Bahut Khub Rahim JI
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Awesome !!! Creation ....... Rahim Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... !  Applause Applause Applause

aise hi asardaar shayri karte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...!

duaaoN ke saath ... !

Teh teh dil se shukriya Naresh jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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Bahut Khub Rahim JI
Shukriya shukriya Rishi bhai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: March 05, 2011, 04:30:41 AM »
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Wah wah Rahim bhai,hamesha ki tarah lajawab peshkash,khoobi se bayaa kiya apne ehsaaso ko.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause :clap:keep it up
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