Woh.......... !!!!!

by Talat on December 16, 2005, 06:49:13 AM
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«Reply #30 on: March 14, 2006, 04:23:25 PM »
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Nice one Sam.....Bharat, bohot achcha likha hai...very true !!!

Thanks Sam, Raj and Bharat !!
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«Reply #31 on: March 19, 2006, 05:52:04 AM »
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Nikalte hain  hum  har shaam   inhi  raaston  per
is ummeed per woh kabhi isi  rah guar se gujrega
aise  gujar  jaayegi  meri  jindagi ki har  shaam
jaane kab  meri  panahon mein  woh  utrega......
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«Reply #32 on: March 21, 2006, 11:05:34 AM »
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Good One Waheed !!!
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Bharat
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«Reply #33 on: March 28, 2006, 02:40:29 AM »
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Waheed,
Bohot hi achcha likha hai...

Talat,
Thanks for appreciation   !!!


shuru jo ho gaya unka naya safar
khatm ho gayee hamari manzeel

"wo" pyar hai kusurwar to nahin
shayad hum hi na the unke kabeel !
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«Reply #34 on: March 29, 2006, 05:12:40 PM »
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Bharat.....very nice again...thanks for writing here..keep writing Usual Smile
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«Reply #35 on: March 30, 2006, 10:53:57 AM »
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Shukriya  Talat........ Bharat  Bhai...........:lol:   very  nice  again.....
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«Reply #36 on: March 31, 2006, 09:33:54 AM »
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Kya ji paayenge hum usko bhula kar ?

Woh! jo saanson main basa hai
Woh! jo aankhon main chupa hai
Dhadkanen har pal naam leti hain jiska....

Kya ji paayenge hum usko bas ek yaad bana kar ?

Woh! jo naam hai ek mohabbat
Woh! jo zindagi ki hai hasrat
Nigaahen dhoondti hain meri jise har lamha

Kya ji paayenge hum usse yoon door ja kar ?
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«Reply #37 on: March 31, 2006, 09:11:09 PM »
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Talat,

Bohot khoob   !!!     very nice.....
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«Reply #38 on: March 31, 2006, 09:12:18 PM »
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Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Shukriya  Talat........ Bharat  Bhai...........:lol:   very  nice  again.....



Waheed,

Thank you.
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«Reply #39 on: March 31, 2006, 09:37:37 PM »
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Kya ji paayenge hum usko bhula kar ?

Woh! jo saanson main basa hai
Woh! jo aankhon main chupa hai
Dhadkanen har pal naam leti hain jiska....

Kya ji paayenge hum usko bas ek yaad bana kar ?

Woh! jo naam hai ek mohabbat
Woh! jo zindagi ki hai hasrat
Nigaahen dhoondti hain meri jise har lamha

Kya ji paayenge hum usse yoon door ja kar ?


Talat

Aap ne ek bahut gehra sawaal utha diya hai...Kya ji paayenge hum?

Bahut khoob !

Aur sab doston ne bhi bahut achcha likha hai

Rajbir
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«Reply #40 on: April 02, 2006, 03:59:38 PM »
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Talat,

Bohot khoob   !!!     very nice.....


Thanks a lot Bharat Usual Smile
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«Reply #41 on: April 02, 2006, 04:02:43 PM »
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Kya ji paayenge hum usko bhula kar ?

Woh! jo saanson main basa hai
Woh! jo aankhon main chupa hai
Dhadkanen har pal naam leti hain jiska....

Kya ji paayenge hum usko bas ek yaad bana kar ?

Woh! jo naam hai ek mohabbat
Woh! jo zindagi ki hai hasrat
Nigaahen dhoondti hain meri jise har lamha

Kya ji paayenge hum usse yoon door ja kar ?


Talat

Aap ne ek bahut gehra sawaal utha diya hai...Kya ji paayenge hum?

Bahut khoob !

Aur sab doston ne bhi bahut achcha likha hai

Rajbir


Thanks Rajbir for appreciating my poem Usual Smile
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«Reply #42 on: April 06, 2006, 02:05:30 AM »
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raqeeb = dushman, rival
mukhateeb = speaking to
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«Reply #43 on: April 06, 2006, 03:09:43 PM »
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Bohot Achcha likha hai Bharat....too good !!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #44 on: April 14, 2006, 09:41:01 AM »
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bahot  khoob  Bharat.............   bahot  hi  accha aap ne  likha........
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