Woh.......... !!!!!

by Talat on December 16, 2005, 06:49:13 AM
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Hai wo mera apna magar kitna mujhse door hai
Humare beech jaane kyun zamaane ka dastoor hai

Uski awaaz se mere saare ghum door ho jaate hain
Uski ek jhalak se mujhpar chaa jaata koi suroor hai

Yeh dunya hai begaani si, begaane logon ke beech
Dil ka mere wo maan hai aur wohi mera ghuroor hai

Jee chahta hai saare ghum uske main baant loon
Hone nahin deta hai wo....jaane kyun majboor hai !!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2005, 06:53:31 AM »
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Wow...........just superb!!! No other words............ Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2005, 02:32:03 PM »
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Wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kya likhi hai Tallu...Amen!
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«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2005, 04:33:33 PM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
Hai wo mera apna magar kitna mujhse door hai
Humare beech jaane kyun zamaane ka dastoor hai

Uski awaaz se mere saare ghum door ho jaate hain
Uski ek jhalak se mujhpar chaa jaata koi suroor hai

Yeh dunya hai begaani si, begaane logon ke beech
Dil ka mere wo maan hai aur wohi mera ghuroor hai

Jee chahta hai saare ghum uske main baant loon
Hone nahin deta hai wo....jaane kyun majboor hai !!!




 Usual Smile  fantastic......
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«Reply #4 on: December 17, 2005, 01:40:15 AM »
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bohut achaa likhi ho yaar  talat..........keep it up
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2005, 11:00:44 AM »
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Hai wo mera apna magar kitna mujhse door hai
Humare beech jaane kyun zamaane ka dastoor hai

Uski awaaz se mere saare ghum door ho jaate hain
Uski ek jhalak se mujhpar chaa jaata koi suroor hai

Yeh dunya hai begaani si, begaane logon ke beech
Dil ka mere wo maan hai aur wohi mera ghuroor hai

Jee chahta hai saare ghum uske main baant loon
Hone nahin deta hai wo....jaane kyun majboor hai !!!




bahut ache Talat

jante hai hum akser ho jate apne door hai
lekin isme apno ka to nahi koi kasoor hai

wo jo aasmaan se sambhale sab ki dor hai
wohi chahta hai, usiko ye sab manzoor hai

hum ne na chah ker bhi chaha hai kisi ko
apni nazro me wo to jannat ki hoor hai

lekin kya kare phir wohi majboori hai
wo hum se aur hum usse bahut door hai
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«Reply #6 on: December 17, 2005, 05:31:08 PM »
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Hello Talat,
A really nice one.....!!!

Hello Sam,
Very good work.........




tassawur = Imagination
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2005, 10:03:41 AM »
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thnax n bahut ache bharat

'wo' ek ajnabi sa hai humare liye
jo ek khamosh awaz ke siwa kuch bhi nahi

'wo' ek diwaangi sa hai humare liye
jo ek sisakte jazbat ke siwa kuch bhi nahi

'wo' ek bandagi sa hai humaare liye
jo ek bichde lamhat ke siwa kuch bhi nahi

'wo' awaargi sa hai humaare liye
jo ek bhuli hui yaad ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2005, 10:54:55 AM »
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are maana gaye guru..... gr8 one.... dear... :wink:
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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2005, 12:54:06 PM »
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nice ..talat...sam...bharat..ji..!!!
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«Reply #10 on: December 21, 2005, 08:10:11 AM »
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Talat & Samnaj ji bahot khub likhe hay....

Kahete hay log, Mautse badtar hay intizar,
Meri tamam umr kati intizar may. [Mazaj]
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«Reply #11 on: December 21, 2005, 11:50:11 AM »
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thanx mili, salma n bhambra
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«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2005, 05:39:03 PM »
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Sam & Salma,
Thanks.
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«Reply #13 on: December 29, 2005, 01:45:44 PM »
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very  nice  Bhambara..................
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