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by vb on November 12, 2010, 06:51:03 PM
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«Reply #1 on: November 12, 2010, 07:15:45 PM »
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Bahut khoob Vb ji ,hamesha ki tarah khoobsurti se likha aapne,excellent,hats off Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 12, 2010, 07:36:54 PM »
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subhanallah ! lajawaab !! daad qabool kareiN vb ji.

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«Reply #3 on: November 15, 2010, 08:43:03 AM »
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kya baat he vb sahab...maza a gaya..behetareen peshkash hai apki..

dher saari daad ke sath likhte rahiye!~
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«Reply #4 on: November 23, 2010, 04:56:27 AM »
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jazbaaton ki aandhi jab gum k tufanon ko sath lati hai
har raat ashkon se ye ek gazal nai likhwati hai

umeedon ka rang nikharta hai fir dhundhla jata hai
har raat indradhanush ko kaale rang me rang jati hai

shor bht hota hai door kahin bahar kahin khidki k
main sunna chahti hun to sirf sannate ki hi awaaz aati hai

mere chaar su.n hai mehfilein jashn aur kaamyaabi
lekin mujhe apni tasveer aaine me tanha hi nazar aati hai

lehrein uthti hain mere dil me jo aakar dimag se takrati hai
main tut kar bikhar jati hun jab ye yaadein mujhe aazmaati hain

kaalima iss andhere ki na jane mujhse kya kehna chahti hai
raat bhar mere hothon pe ye ek nayee dard me dubi gazal sajati hai...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: November 23, 2010, 09:02:01 AM »
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thnx vb ji padhne aur pasand karne k liye,,,,,,
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