ye udaas din bhe guzar gaya (by vb)

by vb on October 06, 2011, 02:47:08 PM
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Meri hasraton ki zameen par
Teray shehr-e-dil k makeen par
Ye ajeeb subhu-e-yaas thi
K har ake cheez udaas thi
Na chaman say ja k saba mili
Kisi khaab ki na kali khili
Koi khushbu’von sa bikhar gaya
Koi apnay aap men mar gaya
Sar-e-shaam hijr k ehed men
Kahin door yaad ki lehed men
Koi aaftaab utar gaya
Ye udaas din bhe guzar gaya

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«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2011, 02:54:41 PM »
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Meri hasraton ki zameen par
Teray shehr-e-dil k makeen par
Ye ajeeb subhu-e-yaas thi
K har ake cheez udaas thi
Na chaman say ja k saba mili
Kisi khaab ki na kali khili
Koi khushbu’von sa bikhar gaya
Koi apnay aap men mar gaya
Sar-e-shaam hijr k ehed men
Kahin door yaad ki lehed men
Koi aaftaab utar gaya
Ye udaas din bhe guzar gaya

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«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2011, 06:30:31 AM »
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Thanx...
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«Reply #3 on: October 07, 2011, 09:42:18 AM »
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wah wah VB sir--

bahot umda post ek bar fir aapki kalam se--

daad aur mubarakbaad kubool karen mujh nachij ki taraf se.

muskurate rahen
khus rahen
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«Reply #4 on: October 07, 2011, 11:19:26 AM »
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bahut khooooooooob vb ji
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2011, 06:00:02 AM »
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sarfira jee! shukriya aap ka..
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«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2011, 06:00:59 AM »
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SURESH SANGWAN jee! buhat shukriya...
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«Reply #7 on: October 08, 2011, 06:04:43 AM »
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Meri hasraton ki zameen par
Teray shehr-e-dil k makeen par icon_flower
Ye ajeeb subhu-e-yaas thi
K har ake cheez udaas thi sad5
Na chaman say ja k saba mili
Kisi khaab ki na kali khili   sad10
Koi khushbu’von sa bikhar gaya
Koi apnay aap men mar gaya    crybaby2
Sar-e-shaam hijr k ehed men
Kahin door yaad ki lehed men icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
Koi aaftaab utar gaya
Ye udaas din bhe guzar gaya icon_flower icon_flower

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«Reply #8 on: October 08, 2011, 06:07:15 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2011, 07:02:38 AM »
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wow kitni khoobsurti se aapne ehsaasaat ko
Lafzon mein piroya hai.very nice vb ji good job
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«Reply #10 on: October 08, 2011, 10:50:13 AM »
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Shaifali jee! shukriya aap ka..
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