ye wo silsila nahi

by bekarar on June 30, 2008, 02:14:30 PM
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ruke kabhi, ye wo silsila nahi....
ye baat aur hai, mere sath koi chala nahi,

kuch logon ke bharose ne, meri achchai ko bachaya hai
warna log kahte hain, aadmi mai bhala nahi,

balatkaar, jhagde, dange aur bhrshtachaar,
jab tak mere saath na hue, mujhe kabhi khala nahi

tujhe toot-kar chaha, tujhe paane ki tamnnana nahi kee
ye khwab meri aankhon me, yun bhi kabhi pala nahi

sar jhooka liya hai, har sitamgar ke saamne
muqabala karun, ragon me ab wo zalzala nahi

kaise bachengi us ghar kee deewaren "bekarar"
jis ghar ke logon me, sach sahne ka housala nahi
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«Reply #1 on: June 30, 2008, 02:34:32 PM »
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real good ur an devdas right?
these dialogs are just dialogs...
there is some 1 i know who is a real devdas ..who has the real dialogs ......
lilmizmishi@yahoo.com
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«Reply #2 on: June 30, 2008, 02:36:04 PM »
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Kuch alag dhang se apne apne zajbaat pesh kiye hai.. magar bahoot he imaandari se likhi hui kavita hai!! pahli baar padi to laga "KAYA?" Dobara padi to.. Wah wah wah!!

Good Job Bekarar jee!!
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«Reply #3 on: June 30, 2008, 02:52:16 PM »
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thanks pooja ji
mai to dar rha tha ye post kar ke.....

rahta wahi musafir, jo mai karwan me chalta,
alag raah par jaane ka, mujhe nasha sa hi chada hai
ye zunun jab badh gaya had se bhi jyada,
dekhta hun peeche wahi karwan khada hai

 
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«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2008, 02:53:21 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 30, 2008, 02:52:16 PM
thanks pooja ji
mai to dar rha tha ye post kar ke.....

app dar kyun rahe the?

Again Nice lines Bekarar jee!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2008, 01:34:36 PM »
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ye pyar mohabbat, ye ishqon ke kisse,
Ye jhoothi kahani, wafaon ke kisse,

Bina dil ko samajhe, dil kee ye baaten,
Bina dard ko jaane, ye dardon ke kisse,

Khud hi kee bewafai, aur tohmat kisi pe,
Ye firkaparasti ke bojhil se kisse,

Mere aansu-on ko jo kahte ho jhootha,
kyun bane jaate ho fir, isi dariya ke hisse

Khayalon kee duniya me jo tumane basaye,
Un veeran makano, ke toote ye hisse,

Khule dil se mano, ke tum bhi galat ho,
Bichade hue dil, milenge to firse,

Thama hai mujhko tumne, to kah do sabhi ko
Kyun chipate ho sach ko, duniya ke dar se,

Karo badzabani, magar soch lena,
Kabhi tum bhi hoge, “budhape” ke hisse

Badi mushkilon se, padhaya hai tumko,
Ab bano tum bhi unki, khushiyon ke kisse

Satao use, chahe ghar se nikalo,
Tere bachche bhi hai, usi maa ke hisse

duniya se chupa loge, apni ye kamiyan,
Kya khud hi se tum, nikal paoge bach ke

Jo tujhko mila hai, bada keemti hai,
Na khona ise jhoothi, mardangi ke dar se,
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2008, 01:45:20 PM »
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Wah Sanjeev jee kaya kavita likhi hai apne.,, ek ek line bahoot ache se likhi hai apne, magar yah do line... kamal..

Mere aansu-on ko jo kahte ho jhootha,
kyun bane jaate ho fir, isi dariya ke hisse

Pata nahi kyun apki kavita mnai do kavitaye najar aai ya kahu ki do alag alag zazbaat najar ayye:

yah pahli kavita.. jaise kisi ne apne zajbaato per likhi ho:
ye pyar mohabbat, ye ishqon ke kisse,
Ye jhoothi kahani, wafaon ke kisse,

Bina dil ko samajhe, dil kee ye baaten,
Bina dard ko jaane, ye dardon ke kisse,

Khud hi kee bewafai, aur tohmat kisi pe,
Ye firkaparasti ke bojhil se kisse,

Mere aansu-on ko jo kahte ho jhootha,
kyun bane jaate ho fir, isi dariya ke hisse

Khayalon kee duniya me jo tumane basaye,
Un veeran makano, ke toote ye hisse,

Khule dil se mano, ke tum bhi galat ho,
Bichade hue dil, milenge to firse,

Thama hai mujhko tumne, to kah do sabhi ko
Kyun chipate ho sach ko, duniya ke dar se,


Aor iske baad.. ek dum se aise laga jaise ki bado ke baare main samjhaya ja raha hai:

Karo badzabani, magar soch lena,
Kabhi tum bhi hoge, “budhape” ke hisse

Badi mushkilon se, padhaya hai tumko,
Ab bano tum bhi unki, khushiyon ke kisse

Satao use, chahe ghar se nikalo,
Tere bachche bhi hai, usi maa ke hisse

duniya se chupa loge, apni ye kamiyan,
Kya khud hi se tum, nikal paoge bach ke

Jo tujhko mila hai, bada keemti hai,
Na khona ise jhoothi, mardangi ke dar se,

Ho sakta hai mujhe samjhane main galati hui ho!!

Overall a very good creation!!    Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2008, 01:53:56 PM »
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pooja ji bilkul sahi samajha aapne ..........ise do bhagon me hi likha gaya..hai....aur bahoot bahoot achcha laga aapke comments padh kar................sukriya ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2008, 02:08:37 PM »
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Sanjeev

Very nice poems ! Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2008, 02:12:22 PM »
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Wow... Wonderful.. Applause
I want to write much more in praise, but I know, I have no words to equalize the emotions, feelings and efforts of yours in writing these MasterPieces..

But, Sincerely.. I just love reading and feeling these creations of Yours.. Sanjeev..
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«Reply #10 on: July 03, 2008, 08:19:04 PM »
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NICE...
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«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2008, 11:47:05 AM »
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Bekarar, you always write on different themes....so deep and meaningful...No words...Superb work  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2008, 03:48:35 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 03, 2008, 01:45:20 PM
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Wah Sanjeev jee kaya kavita likhi hai apne.,, ek ek line bahoot ache se likhi hai apne, magar yah do line... kamal..

Mere aansu-on ko jo kahte ho jhootha,
kyun bane jaate ho fir, isi dariya ke hisse

Pata nahi kyun apki kavita mnai do kavitaye najar aai ya kahu ki do alag alag zazbaat najar ayye:

yah pahli kavita.. jaise kisi ne apne zajbaato per likhi ho:
ye pyar mohabbat, ye ishqon ke kisse,
Ye jhoothi kahani, wafaon ke kisse,

Bina dil ko samajhe, dil kee ye baaten,
Bina dard ko jaane, ye dardon ke kisse,

Khud hi kee bewafai, aur tohmat kisi pe,
Ye firkaparasti ke bojhil se kisse,

Mere aansu-on ko jo kahte ho jhootha,
kyun bane jaate ho fir, isi dariya ke hisse

Khayalon kee duniya me jo tumane basaye,
Un veeran makano, ke toote ye hisse,

Khule dil se mano, ke tum bhi galat ho,
Bichade hue dil, milenge to firse,

Thama hai mujhko tumne, to kah do sabhi ko
Kyun chipate ho sach ko, duniya ke dar se,


Aor iske baad.. ek dum se aise laga jaise ki bado ke baare main samjhaya ja raha hai:

Karo badzabani, magar soch lena,
Kabhi tum bhi hoge, “budhape” ke hisse

Badi mushkilon se, padhaya hai tumko,
Ab bano tum bhi unki, khushiyon ke kisse

Satao use, chahe ghar se nikalo,
Tere bachche bhi hai, usi maa ke hisse

duniya se chupa loge, apni ye kamiyan,
Kya khud hi se tum, nikal paoge bach ke

Jo tujhko mila hai, bada keemti hai,
Na khona ise jhoothi, mardangi ke dar se,

Ho sakta hai mujhe samjhane main galati hui ho!!

Overall a very good creation!!    Applause Applause




Satao use, chahe ghar se nikalo,
Tere bachche bhi hai, usi maa ke hisse

duniya se chupa loge, apni ye kamiyan,
Kya khud hi se tum, nikal paoge bach ke

Jo tujhko mila hai, bada keemti hai,
Na khona ise jhoothi, mardangi ke dar se,

pooja ji upar likhi gai ye line un mardon ke liye hai..jo apni biwiyon ko bewazah bina kisi baat ke apmanit karte hain...kai baar to sirf mardangi dikhane ke liye.....lekin wo bhool jaate hain ki jin bachchon ke wo pita hain unki biwi unhi bachchon ki maa bhi hai....aur bachche apni maa ki bhi utani hi ijjat karte hain jitani ki pita ki...aur kai baar apni maa ko bewazah apmaanit hota dekh ke.....man hi man apne pita se nafrat karne lagte hain....
 ab aap in lines ko padhen
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«Reply #13 on: July 04, 2008, 03:55:41 PM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on July 03, 2008, 02:08:37 PM
Sanjeev

Very nice poems ! Thumbs UP

aapke comments padhna hamesh kuch naya likhne ke liye utsahit karta hai....housala afzai ka shukriya...raj bro

Quote from: Mahiya on July 03, 2008, 02:12:22 PM
Wow... Wonderful.. Applause
I want to write much more in praise, but I know, I have no words to equalize the emotions, feelings and efforts of yours in writing these MasterPieces..

But, Sincerely.. I just love reading and feeling these creations of Yours.. Sanjeev..

shukriya mahiya.......
itne khoobsurat tareeke se aapne housalafzai kee hai ....ki lagata hai kahin mai full time shayar hi na ban jaun
thanks for appricietion
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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2008, 03:59:36 PM »
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Quote from: faiiz_76 on July 03, 2008, 08:19:04 PM
NICE...

bahoot bahoot shukriya faiz.......

Quote from: Celmira on July 04, 2008, 11:47:05 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bekarar, you always write on different themes....so deep and meaningful...No words...Superb work  Applause Applause Applause

talat aapke comments padhkar bahoot khushi hui....thanks again
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