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by tabassum shakeel on January 15, 2007, 09:52:22 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 28, 2008, 09:04:56 AM »
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hmmmm yahaan  sabko yoindia ke baare me  likhna hai
 bole to aapko kaisa lagta hai kya rishta hai isase .........main likhti hun
 sabse pahle apun ko bole to prose likhna  mushkil padta hai  to  asusual verse hi  likhungi ......................

*******YoInDiA********


phir ik din aisa aayega
jab naam yahaan ke badalenge
kuchh naye naam muskaaenge
tum ham jo aaj ye likhte hain
pichhle panne ban jaayenge
 
nai soch ki  nai si  baaten
naye tarane goonjenge
nai dosti  naye se shikve
naye bahane hans denge
phir koi kisi ke likhe ko
ik naye se dhang se sarahegaa
aur koi likha kisi ka bas
kisi ka saath nibhayega
tab naam aaj jo hain saare
un naye naamo par muskaenge
yaadon ki  dhund me kuchh chehare
khwaabon se hasin muskaaenge

hai ek nasha ye saath yahaan
jo aur badha jab likh daala
ise jab hai padha ye sar pe chadha
jab bhoolna chaaaha rog bana
ye dil se yun vaabsta sa
ab isase juda na soch koi
jab yahaan likha dil khush hai hua
jab nahi likha dil afsurda
ye saath bhi hai aur saath nahi
ye dil me hai aawaaz nahi
jab dil se maine kabhi poochha
kya rishta hai isase tera
dil hans ke mujhse kahta hai
main dil tera ye dil mera........


A Wonderful Creation.... Usual Smile I just read it.. quite true..
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«Reply #16 on: April 28, 2008, 09:28:03 AM »
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waah tabassum aaj pehliibaar tumeh paRha bahoot hi achha likhti hi.....Ek Genral verse ko free hand se iss tara dena......achha lagta hai how the pen bleeds one can see.....its an art....

gar tum hote aaj yahaaN per
Naye musafir panap gaye haiN
Dil ki bateiN apne is yo par
likhte likhte pakde gaye haiN

nayii soch ke naye tarane
aaker dekho Goonj rahe haiN
Tere musalsal shabdoN se jo
Nikle ahsaas ab tol rahe haiN.

Rishta itna hi tha tera kya
Tere shabd ab bol rahe haiN
nayi umer ki nayi fasal ko
apni kalam se tol rahe haiN.





hmmmm yahaan  sabko yoindia ke baare me  likhna hai
 bole to aapko kaisa lagta hai kya rishta hai isase .........main likhti hun
 sabse pahle apun ko bole to prose likhna  mushkil padta hai  to  asusual verse hi  likhungi ......................

*******YoInDiA********


phir ik din aisa aayega
jab naam yahaan ke badalenge
kuchh naye naam muskaaenge
tum ham jo aaj ye likhte hain
pichhle panne ban jaayenge
 
nai soch ki  nai si  baaten
naye tarane goonjenge
nai dosti  naye se shikve
naye bahane hans denge
phir koi kisi ke likhe ko
ik naye se dhang se sarahegaa
aur koi likha kisi ka bas
kisi ka saath nibhayega
tab naam aaj jo hain saare
un naye naamo par muskaenge
yaadon ki  dhund me kuchh chehare
khwaabon se hasin muskaaenge

hai ek nasha ye saath yahaan
jo aur badha jab likh daala
ise jab hai padha ye sar pe chadha
jab bhoolna chaaaha rog bana
ye dil se yun vaabsta sa
ab isase juda na soch koi
jab yahaan likha dil khush hai hua
jab nahi likha dil afsurda
ye saath bhi hai aur saath nahi
ye dil me hai aawaaz nahi
jab dil se maine kabhi poochha
kya rishta hai isase tera
dil hans ke mujhse kahta hai
main dil tera ye dil mera........

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«Reply #17 on: May 09, 2008, 12:30:26 PM »
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bahut ache harsh ..badhya likha ahi
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«Reply #18 on: May 30, 2008, 08:22:23 PM »
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tum ham jo aaj ye likhte hain
pichhle panne ban jaayenge  Clapping Smiley
 
jab dil se maine kabhi poochha
kya rishta hai isase tera
dil hans ke mujhse kahta hai
main dil tera ye dil mera........


wah bahoot khoob tabassum!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: February 25, 2009, 08:03:00 AM »
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Bhoot bahoot kbhoob tabassum.. bahoot hi sach likha hai.. Very beautiful creation..
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«Reply #20 on: January 15, 2010, 10:41:52 AM »
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SHAANDAR, SHAANDAR, SHAAAAAAAAAAANDAAAAAR

MUJHE SAHIR KI LINES YAAD AA GAYIEN
'MAIN PAL DO PAL KA SHAYR HOON' Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: July 05, 2010, 05:56:37 PM »
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Aadaab o Tasleemaat Tabassum Ji !
Yoindia ke liye bohot achchhe andaaz meN apne khayaalaat ka izhaar farmaaya hai. Meri taraf se dili mubaarakbaad.

Shaam ki tution ? makhsoos logon ke liye hai ya a'am hai.
Mera matlab hai ki ? mujh jaise ko bhi kuchh seekhne ko mil sakta hai.
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