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by tabassum shakeel on January 15, 2007, 09:52:22 AM
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hmmmm yahaan  sabko yoindia ke baare me  likhna hai
 bole to aapko kaisa lagta hai kya rishta hai isase .........main likhti hun
 sabse pahle apun ko bole to prose likhna  mushkil padta hai  to  asusual verse hi  likhungi ......................

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phir ik din aisa aayega
jab naam yahaan ke badalenge
kuchh naye naam muskaaenge
tum ham jo aaj ye likhte hain
pichhle panne ban jaayenge
 
nai soch ki  nai si  baaten
naye tarane goonjenge
nai dosti  naye se shikve
naye bahane hans denge
phir koi kisi ke likhe ko
ik naye se dhang se sarahegaa
aur koi likha kisi ka bas
kisi ka saath nibhayega
tab naam aaj jo hain saare
un naye naamo par muskaenge
yaadon ki  dhund me kuchh chehare
khwaabon se hasin muskaaenge

hai ek nasha ye saath yahaan
jo aur badha jab likh daala
ise jab hai padha ye sar pe chadha
jab bhoolna chaaaha rog bana
ye dil se yun vaabsta sa
ab isase juda na soch koi
jab yahaan likha dil khush hai hua
jab nahi likha dil afsurda
ye saath bhi hai aur saath nahi
ye dil me hai aawaaz nahi
jab dil se maine kabhi poochha
kya rishta hai isase tera
dil hans ke mujhse kahta hai
main dil tera ye dil mera........
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«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2007, 10:52:18 AM »
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awesum...too good Tabassum..main bhi likhungi baad mein

tum ham jo aaj ye likhte hain
pichhle panne ban jaayenge

yeh lines bahut hi achi lagi ..
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«Reply #2 on: January 15, 2007, 03:16:48 PM »
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Tabassum baji...bahut hi khubsurati se likha hai aapne..aap hamesha se aacha hi likhe hain..hume bhi shikaye na...aapke kitne pass rehte huve bhi aapse kuch shyari shikne ko nahi mil raha hai sad5
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2007, 03:51:37 PM »
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awesum...too good Tabassum..main bhi likhungi baad mein

tum ham jo aaj ye likhte hain
pichhle panne ban jaayenge

yeh lines bahut hi achi lagi ..

thanx nikki likhna zaroor m waiting ......mujhe pata hai tum bahut achcha likhati ho .........
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«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2007, 03:55:13 PM »
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Tabassum baji...bahut hi khubsurati se likha hai aapne..aap hamesha se aacha hi likhe hain..hume bhi shikaye na...aapke kitne pass rehte huve bhi aapse kuch shyari shikne ko nahi mil raha hai sad5


thanx salma dear ....main  bole to  tumko sikhaun Huh?? Shocked kya bolti ho.......haan ye sach hai ham sabse paas hain hamnaam  hamvatan par mil nahi paate ........ab aisa karte hain daily shaamki tuion rakhte hain main shayeri  sikhati hun {jaise mujhe bahut achchi aati ho :wink: }tum mujhe prose likhna sikhana :wink:



par yahaan kisine nahi likha yoinidia ke baare me ? Puzzled !
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2007, 11:18:16 AM »
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bahut ache tabs ji . .
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2007, 12:48:21 PM »
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Tabassum baji...bahut hi khubsurati se likha hai aapne..aap hamesha se aacha hi likhe hain..hume bhi shikaye na...aapke kitne pass rehte huve bhi aapse kuch shyari shikne ko nahi mil raha hai sad5


thanx salma dear ....main  bole to  tumko sikhaun Huh?? Shocked kya bolti ho.......haan ye sach hai ham sabse paas hain hamnaam  hamvatan par mil nahi paate ........ab aisa karte hain daily shaamki tuion rakhte hain main shayeri  sikhati hun {jaise mujhe bahut achchi aati ho :wink: }tum mujhe prose likhna sikhana :wink:



par yahaan kisine nahi likha yoinidia ke baare me ? Puzzled !


bajiiiiiiiiiiiiii Shocked  maine kab prose likha  Shocked  :oops:  Puzzled !

sach me yaad nahi  ..sure sure shaam ki tution aage se...aur fees aapko meri koi aur de dega unse maang lene  :wink: lolzz



Yoindai pe kai member register karte hain
koi shyari likhte hain to koi faltu bak bak karte hain
koi masti karte hain to koi apne jazbat lafz me dalte hain
hum bas sab ko dekhte rehte hainaur faltu me bheja khate hain  :wink:  :wink:  lolzz

kuch nahi aata na  :wink:

isse char line k siwa hume kuch nahi aata hai likhne lolzzz samjhe baji
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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2007, 04:10:21 AM »
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wah wah . . .bahut ache salma . .koun kahta hai tumhe nahi aata . .itna acha to tabs ji bhi nahi likh sakte
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«Reply #8 on: February 07, 2007, 07:07:38 AM »
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wah wah . . .bahut ache salma . .koun kahta hai tumhe nahi aata . .itna acha to tabs ji bhi nahi likh sakte


sachi muchi  :oops:  :D  Shocked  glasses2  :D

shukriya shukriya ..wo toh aise hi kabhi kabhi dimag kaam kar leta hai :-P
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«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2007, 12:58:48 PM »
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ye sticky kab ban gaya thread Puzzled !
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2007, 06:25:01 AM »
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A very good post i got to read today tabassum di
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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2007, 04:18:54 PM »
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arre way
mujhe bhi acha laga
kya baat hai
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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2008, 05:53:40 PM »
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humtho aaj hi padhare hai,bas dekh rahe nazare hai
likhenge kuch naya naya,jab dil pukare hai
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«Reply #13 on: February 26, 2008, 10:50:00 AM »
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Jab dil roya toh koi naa paas tha
Yoindia tab teri mujhe yaad aayi
Ankh mein asun on lavzon ka saath tha
saath ba yoindia,na akelapan,naya ahsaas tha
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«Reply #14 on: April 28, 2008, 08:59:41 AM »
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[phir ik din aisa aayega
jab naam yahaan ke badalenge
kuchh naye naam muskaaenge
tum ham jo aaj ye likhte hain
pichhle panne ban jaayenge]



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