Zamaana Kharab Hai----------Advo.RavinderRavi"Sagar"

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Tum  husn ki   pari ho,
Ek Shayar  ek  khawab.!

Chamkti Zmee par yuN,
Jaise Flaq ka Mehtaab.!!

KhayaloN ki Malika ho,
Tum  khoob  ho  janab.!

Husn wale jalte  dekh,
Tera   husn-e-shabaab.!!

Bachke chalana hajoor,
Zamaana   hai  kharab.!

Koyi  pina  le  chalkati,
Teri aankhoN ki sharab.!!

Chehara na dikha yuN,
Ab daal  bhi  le hijab.!

Koyi chedega to karegi,
Phir  rukh  par  naqab.!!




तुम हुस्न की परी हो,
एक शायर का  खवाब.!

चमकती ज़मी  पर यूँ,
जैसे फ्लक़ का महताब.!!

ख़यालों की मलिका हो,
तुम  खूब  हो  जनाब.!

हुस्न  वेल  जलते देख,
तेरा     हुस्न-ए-शबाब.!!

बचके   चलना   हजूर,
ज़माना    है   खराब.!

कोई  पीना ले छलकती,
तेरी  आँखों की  शराब.!!

चेहरा   ना  दिखा  यूँ,
अब डाल भी ले  हिजाब.!

कोई  छेड़ेगा तो  करेगी,
फिर  रुख़  पर  नक़ाब.!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2013, 02:20:01 PM »
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bahut sunder aur laajawaab
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2013, 05:29:43 PM »
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bohut khubsurat likha hai dear very nice
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2013, 05:53:25 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaah.. bahut khoooooob...
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«Reply #4 on: October 20, 2013, 07:31:38 PM »
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bhut khub kay baat kay baat
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«Reply #5 on: October 21, 2013, 04:43:45 AM »
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wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2013, 09:02:11 AM »
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bahut sunder aur laajawaab
Thanks Sir.
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«Reply #7 on: October 21, 2013, 12:51:28 PM »
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Nice ji bahut khoob.
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2013, 06:31:42 AM »
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bohut khubsurat likha hai dear very nice
Shuqriya.
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2013, 06:32:37 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaah.. bahut khoooooob...
Thankyou !
Aqsh ji.
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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2013, 06:33:21 AM »
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bhut khub kay baat kay baat
Thanks Rajan Jee.
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wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Thankyou !
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«Reply #12 on: October 22, 2013, 06:34:56 AM »
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Nice ji bahut khoob.
Shuqriya.
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