ZINDAGI ACHHI HAI (2-Liner)... "MohaN"

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ZINDAGI ACHHI HAI

Kisii ne mujh se poochhaa ke woh aajkal kaisi hai
Main ne kahaa shukria hazoor zindagi achhi hai...

Surindar. N                       "MohaN"
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2016, 04:14:11 AM »
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WAAH WAAH WAAH
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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2016, 01:54:06 AM »
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WAAH WAAH WAAH
bahut shukria saahill Sahib.
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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2016, 04:28:16 AM »
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Bahut Khub Surindarn Sahab




Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2016, 02:16:36 PM »
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Bahut Khub Surindarn Sahab




Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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bahut shukria Arshad Jee. hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2016, 03:58:16 AM »
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bahut shukria Priya Jee.
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«Reply #7 on: September 14, 2016, 01:49:37 AM »
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ZINDAGI ACHHI HAI

Kisii ne mujh se poochhaa ke woh aajkal kaisi hai
Main ne kahaa shukria hazoor zindagi achhi hai...

Surindar. N                       "MohaN"

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2016, 01:12:16 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2016, 01:47:35 PM »
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Nice post........n please tell me how can I post my poetry?
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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2016, 01:48:23 PM »
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आह !
ये कैसा मौसम है ...!
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चहु दिशाएं ..........काँप रहीं
जाता रहा .....वो नीम का आखिरी पत्ता
ज़मीं के प्यारे गाँव में ...
छा गया है .....पतझर का मेला
और जैसे मेरे गाँव ........आ पंहुचा है
बंजारा सा मौसम .
और आते ही छेड़ बैठा है ....वीरानी सी धुन
उसके कंठ से झर रहा है ........राग मालकौंस का रंग
शाख की बाहें छुड़ाकर .............झर गयीं कुछ पत्तियां
और कुछ ......फूलों की यादों में
और कुछ तितलियों की गठरी से निकलकर
मौसम की हुक जा मिली है .......बहती हवाओं में
मौसम की हुक जा लगी है .... मिटटी के सीने से
बिखर कर छा गयी है ..........सम्मोहन के फहाये सी
मौसम की ....तीव्र-मंथर रागिनी सुनती लहरों सी
नदी चुपचाप बह रही है ...एक नाव उठाये सीने पर..!
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देखो
झर गया है महुवा ,नीम,पीपल
कोई चुपचाप गढ़ रहा हो जैसे .......कोहरे की चादर
उकडू होके बैठा है .............जीवन
अलावों के आगे
कौन जाने .....किस गुफा में
जा सोया है .....सूरज
अब कौन चलाये किरणों का करघा
कौन जुटाए रंगों का मेला
कौन बिखेरे फूलों से खुशबू
शब्द,स्पर्श,गंध,रूप,रंग,.......सब छीज गए हों जैसे
चकवा और चकोर के मन से रिस रहा है धीरज...!
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सुनो .......तुम आ जाओ ना बासंती नेह के गीत गुनगुनाती हुई ..........!
खिलते फूल सी ज़िन्दगी महकाने को .....!!!
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