Zindagi Aur Maut

by abdulhabib on November 27, 2009, 08:43:09 AM
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Din key Ujaley mein Rehkar,Raat Key Andhero sey Darthey hain,
Magar Raat tho Aur Haseen hai , Jismey Chand aur Taarey Chamakthey hai ,

Waisey hi Hum Is Zindagi Ko Mehfus Samajthey Hain,
Lekin Maut key Agosh Mein , Khud Hum hi Chamakthey Taarey Hongey.
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«Reply #1 on: November 27, 2009, 11:06:08 AM »
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Last Ki Line Kuch Sahi Nahi Lagi
waise Upar ki doline bhut hi sweet hai
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: November 27, 2009, 11:31:53 AM »
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Good effort Abdul Ji
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«Reply #3 on: November 27, 2009, 12:26:38 PM »
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Ye ek general belief hai ki maut k baad hum sitaare ban aakaash mai chamakte hain....
Yahi kaha hai last line mai.....

Zinda they tou taare jaise zindgi mai chamke nahi
Ab maut ko gale laga ke hum aakaash mai chamkenge...

Last Ki Line Kuch Sahi Nahi Lagi
waise Upar ki doline bhut hi sweet hai
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«Reply #4 on: November 27, 2009, 09:31:13 PM »
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Thank you all for your comments and advice. Waisey i have tried to give the last two lines better effect , lekin it seems key kuch adhuri si laghthi hai, Anyway i have tried in my another post ZINDAGI AND MAUT ( TUNED ) plz check that and comment yaara.
Thank you all and Wish you all always a Great time.
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«Reply #5 on: November 27, 2009, 09:37:11 PM »
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Thank you Koyal for explaining the last lines. Yeah yeahi mere kahayal mein tha jab mainey yeh lines likhi , then again thoda improve karkey  i posted another one in ZINDAGI AUR MAUT (TUNED).Please check that and write your comments. Thank u
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2014, 06:27:36 AM »
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Mout ke khouf ko main khouf nahin samajhta,,

Us se judaa hone ka darr meri jaan le lega....Nick
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«Reply #7 on: October 21, 2014, 10:22:25 AM »
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nice one
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