Zindagi (by vb)

by vb on August 03, 2010, 09:21:52 PM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 960 times)
vb
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 29
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
16 days, 15 hours and 45 minutes.
Posts: 1238
Member Since: Apr 2010


View Profile
Reply with quote

Zindagi tujh say gilla kuch bhe nahi

Muskuraahat bhe unhi jaisi hay
Teri chaahat bhe unhi jaisi hay
Teri fitrat hay bichharna mil kar
Teri aadat bhi unhi jaisi hay...
Zindagi...

Yunhi mitti ko jaan day dena
Phir say miti main milana sub kuch
Timtimaana kisi ki aankhon main
Apni hiddat say jalaana sub kuch
Zindagi …

Tera chehra bhe unhi jaisa hay
Ik haseen, pyaar ka paikar jaisay
Yoon damakta hay haseen raton main
Roshni chaand say lay kar jaisay
Zindagi...

Dil ye karta hay teri soorat main
Hum hamesha k leyay kho jain
Teri baanhon ka sahaara lay kar
Hum hamesha k leyay so jain

Zindagi tujh say gila kuch bhe nahi
Teri fitrat hay bichharna mil kar
Zindagi tujh say gila kuch bhe nahi
Teri aadat bhi unhi jaisi hay..
Zindagi…

Logged
jasbirsingh
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
30 days, 9 hours and 28 minutes.

AAJ BHI INTEZAAR HAI... KAHA HO TUM !!!

Posts: 5761
Member Since: Nov 2008


View Profile WWW
«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2010, 09:47:38 PM »
Reply with quote
wah wah wah wah VB ji... wah


jasbir singh
hira_company@yahoo.com
Logged
Sajid_Ghayel
Maqbool Shayar
****

Rau: 4
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
3 days, 1 hours and 36 minutes.

Posts: 429
Member Since: Nov 2009


View Profile WWW
«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2010, 11:10:39 PM »
Reply with quote
Muskuraahat bhe unhi jaisi hay
Teri chaahat bhe unhi jaisi hay
Teri fitrat hay bichharna mil kar
Teri aadat bhi unhi jaisi hay...

Bohat khoob VB saheb.....
Logged
unknown user
Guest
«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2010, 01:53:50 AM »
Reply with quote
...very well written, haseen peshkash! no comparison





Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 114
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 2 hours and 59 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16238
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2010, 03:46:07 AM »
Reply with quote
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut khoob Vb ji... bahut khoobsurat rachna hai... dil ko chhoo gayi aapki ye rachna...!!!
Logged
khwahish
WeCare
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 166
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
271 days, 21 hours and 54 minutes.

Posts: 11812
Member Since: Sep 2006


View Profile
«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2010, 12:06:21 PM »
Reply with quote
Bahut bahut Khoob Vb Ji..

bahut Khoobsurat!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
vb
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 29
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
16 days, 15 hours and 45 minutes.
Posts: 1238
Member Since: Apr 2010


View Profile
«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2010, 05:55:27 PM »
Reply with quote
jasbirsingh jee! buhat shukriya aap ka.. daad vasool pai...
Logged
vb
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 29
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
16 days, 15 hours and 45 minutes.
Posts: 1238
Member Since: Apr 2010


View Profile
«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2010, 05:56:23 PM »
Reply with quote
Sajid_Ghayel jee! buhat shukriya
Logged
vb
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 29
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
16 days, 15 hours and 45 minutes.
Posts: 1238
Member Since: Apr 2010


View Profile
«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2010, 05:59:16 PM »
Reply with quote
unknown user jee! buhat shukriya aap ki comments ka...
comparison! aap ne jisay tashbeeh kaha, hamaray liyay tu ista'aara hay...
Logged
vb
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 29
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
16 days, 15 hours and 45 minutes.
Posts: 1238
Member Since: Apr 2010


View Profile
«Reply #9 on: August 04, 2010, 06:00:09 PM »
Reply with quote
klaskar jee! aap ka buhat shukriya k parha aap ne or achhay comments chhoray
Logged
vb
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 29
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
16 days, 15 hours and 45 minutes.
Posts: 1238
Member Since: Apr 2010


View Profile
«Reply #10 on: August 04, 2010, 06:01:16 PM »
Reply with quote
khwaish jee! buhat shukriya aap ki khoobsurat comments ka...
Logged
unknown user
Guest
«Reply #11 on: August 04, 2010, 08:51:37 PM »
Reply with quote
Tashbeeh, Ista'aara? Please Explain! and Thanks in advance!
Logged
vb
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 29
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
16 days, 15 hours and 45 minutes.
Posts: 1238
Member Since: Apr 2010


View Profile
«Reply #12 on: August 04, 2010, 09:10:57 PM »
Reply with quote
unknown user jee!

comparison ka word parh kar hum aisay he kuch likh gay... waisay hum answer denay ki koshish kartay hain...

jaisa k hum ne nazm main life n kisi ka comparison likha hay... yani life ko kisi say tashbeeh dee hay... k life kisi jaisi hay.. isay urdu litrature main 'tashbeeh' kehtay hain..

agar hum nazm main likhtay k 'zindagi tum ho' yani directly kisi ko life keh diya hota tu ye tashbeeh dena ya comparison karna na hota.. balkay isay as a 'ista'aara' use kiya hota... jis ki is nazm main kami hay...

hopefuly hum kuch samjha payay hon gay...
yw
Logged
unknown user
Guest
«Reply #13 on: August 04, 2010, 09:41:06 PM »
Reply with quote
your time in explaining it to the details is much appreciated and the original idea as well of life's comparison is sadly true!
God bless the penmanship again!
Logged
vb
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 29
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
16 days, 15 hours and 45 minutes.
Posts: 1238
Member Since: Apr 2010


View Profile
«Reply #14 on: August 04, 2010, 10:00:30 PM »
Reply with quote
thanx for taking the time to reading it... visiting again n nice comments...
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
October 22, 2019, 05:10:15 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[October 21, 2019, 07:34:07 PM]

[October 21, 2019, 07:32:59 PM]

[October 20, 2019, 01:01:17 AM]

[October 20, 2019, 01:01:10 AM]

[October 19, 2019, 02:15:17 PM]

[October 19, 2019, 01:58:58 PM]

[October 19, 2019, 01:57:48 PM]

[October 19, 2019, 01:34:20 PM]

[October 19, 2019, 01:32:35 PM]

[October 19, 2019, 12:54:52 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.192 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 48390 Real Poets and poetry admirer