~Zindagi ek dokha hai~ by Rahim

by dead heart on July 07, 2010, 04:28:21 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 09, 2010, 08:26:56 AM »
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Abdul Rahim bhai aapne apni takhleeq mein zaruri tarmeem kardi, iske liye shukriya. Koi agar ghalt raaye de to hargiz na mano aur sahee de to foran maan lenii chahiye. Hame ek jagah thaharna nahi  balkey afzaliyat ki taraf badhte rahna hai. 

Haider bhai,sahibe-kalaam ne zaruri correction kar diya hai isliye us baat ka ab charcha karna munasib nahi. Waise maine buraa lagne wali ya dil shikni wali koi baat nahii kahi thi. Han itna hi kahna chahungake “Kya kisi se koi suwaal karna is web par jurm ya gunaah hai?”jabki sawal bhi sahi ho.   

Brokenbyluv ji aapne  mere comment ko deletekar diya jabki mane koi vulgar ya abusive baat nahi kahi thi na kisi ko kosa tha, bas asaan sa sawaal puchha tha. Aisa lagata hai yahan guest agar tareef kare to theek, sawaal kare to ghalat. Agar koi guest sahi aur  logical comment karta hai to us par ghaur karna chahiye tabhi lagega ke hum yahan seekhne aate hain. 
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«Reply #16 on: July 09, 2010, 12:49:22 PM »
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Kuch alag likhne ki koshish ki hai...Umeed hai pasand ayega...

Zindagi ek khubsoorat dokha hai,
Jannat pane ka ek awal moka hai…

Jab phenkta hai Allah kamyabi ka full toss,
Toh lagta khushion ka choka hai…

Jab pata hai mushkilon ka bouncer musafir,
Toh insaan apne naseeb ko khoob kosta hai…

Mara jaye ek dinn dange ya blast main ‘Khamosh’,
Kya issi dinn kay liye apne ap ko tu palta hai…

Nafraton se bhari duniya main kya jeena yaaron,
Wakei dil kehta hai ‘zindagi ek haseen sa dokha hai…’


~Rahim~

Rahim Ji...Aadaab ! aapki peshkash bahut khoob lagi mujhe ...sabhi ashaar dil ko chhute hai....dil se daad !

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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dead heart
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«Reply #17 on: July 13, 2010, 07:31:38 PM »
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   Nice n different one Rahim ji. Aur Plz likhte rahein.

Shukriya jee
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«Reply #18 on: July 13, 2010, 07:34:51 PM »
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Abdul Rahim bhai aapne apni takhleeq mein zaruri tarmeem kardi, iske liye shukriya. Koi agar ghalt raaye de to hargiz na mano aur sahee de to foran maan lenii chahiye. Hame ek jagah thaharna nahi  balkey afzaliyat ki taraf badhte rahna hai. 

Haider bhai,sahibe-kalaam ne zaruri correction kar diya hai isliye us baat ka ab charcha karna munasib nahi. Waise maine buraa lagne wali ya dil shikni wali koi baat nahii kahi thi. Han itna hi kahna chahungake “Kya kisi se koi suwaal karna is web par jurm ya gunaah hai?”jabki sawal bhi sahi ho.   

Brokenbyluv ji aapne  mere comment ko deletekar diya jabki mane koi vulgar ya abusive baat nahi kahi thi na kisi ko kosa tha, bas asaan sa sawaal puchha tha. Aisa lagata hai yahan guest agar tareef kare to theek, sawaal kare to ghalat. Agar koi guest sahi aur  logical comment karta hai to us par ghaur karna chahiye tabhi lagega ke hum yahan seekhne aate hain. 

Mere bhai, mere dost, dekha jae toh apke post ka bilkul bhi kuch galat nahin laga mager woh dusre guest ke comment ka tha..
Chalo bada dil rakh ap mujhe maaf kijiyega aur iss baat ko yahin finish karna behtar hoga...
Shukriya!
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«Reply #19 on: July 13, 2010, 07:36:25 PM »
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Rahim Ji...Aadaab ! aapki peshkash bahut khoob lagi mujhe ...sabhi ashaar dil ko chhute hai....dil se daad !

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
Shukriya jee...teh dil se shukar guzar hoon apka..
Duaein meri taraf se bhi dil se...
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