~Zindagi kya hai~ by Rahim

by dead heart on June 04, 2010, 06:56:49 PM
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Bahaut sidhe lavson main likha hai maine mager bahaut gehraion se likha hai..dil se nikle hui yeh peshkash..

Itne mile ghum; dil bhool chuka hai khushi kya hai,
Nafratein kayi mili; kisi ne dikhaya nahin mohobat kya hai…

Aise bhi log aye jinhone chorr dia haath thamke,
Kash koi mehsoos karta ke dard-e-bewaffai kya hai…

Waise toh hassi liye phirta hoon labon par,
Par aj tak jana nahin ke dil se muskurana kya hai…

‘Khamosh’ zinda hai toh bas isiliye ke khwab pure kar sakoun,
Warna maine toh arson main ehsaas nahin kiya zindagi kya hai…

Itne mile ghum; dil bhool chuka hai khushi kya hai,
Nafratein kayi mili; kisi ne dikhaya nahin mohobat kya hai…


~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2010, 10:10:13 PM »


bahut khoob rahim sahab.......iss per maine ek sher likha hai...


                MAT KAR MEHROOM MUJHE APNI DOSTI SE,
                ZAKHIRA BAHUT HAI DUSHMANI KA MERE DAAMAN MEIN....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2010, 11:04:59 PM »
wah bahut hi khoob, rahim ji.. wah wah

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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2010, 01:39:59 AM »
Bahaut sidhe lavson main likha hai maine mager bahaut gehraion se likha hai..dil se nikle hui yeh peshkash..

Itne mile ghum; dil bhool chuka hai khushi kya hai,
Nafratein kayi mili; kisi ne dikhaya nahin mohobat kya hai…

Aise bhi log aye jinhone chorr dia haath thamke,
Kash koi mehsoos karta ke dard-e-bewaffai kya hai…

Waise toh hassi liye phirta hoon labon par,
Par aj tak jana nahin ke dil se muskurana kya hai…

‘Khamosh’ zinda hai toh bas isiliye ke khwab pure kar sakoun,
Warna maine toh arson main ehsaas nahin kiya zindagi kya hai…

Itne mile ghum; dil bhool chuka hai khushi kya hai,
Nafratein kayi mili; kisi ne dikhaya nahin mohobat kya hai…


~Rahim~

acchi gazel hai
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2010, 03:59:06 AM »
Shukriya Jasbir jee, Manoj jee aur Adil jee..

Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa baat hai Adil jee..dil choo lia apne!
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2010, 07:22:53 AM »
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Waah !!! kya kehne dost... bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 05, 2010, 08:52:03 PM »
shukriya mere dost...
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