आज के वक्त की यही दरकार

by pawan16 on September 15, 2012, 02:45:24 PM
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मंजिल पर पंहुचते-पंहुचते आज टूटी कतार हे,
आज खडा हूं वहा जहा दोनो तरफ मझधार हे,
मंजिल दिख रही हे मुझको थोडा दुर आज मेरा संसार हे
पर वंही दिखता  रोशन समा हे ओर जलता हुआ मंजार हे,
मेरी आज की मेहनत कोन कहता बेकार हे
मैने इसे की आने वाले कल के वक्त पर उधार हे,
अहमियत मेरी हमेशा रहेगी जब तक   तेरी सांसे मेरे मे शुमार हे,
पवन तुझे पंहुचना हे वहा जहा तु नंही जिसके लिये तु बेकरार हे......


manzil par puchte-puchte tooti aj meri katar hai,
aj khada hu vaha dost jaha bana ek majhdhar hai,
manzil mujko dikhti hai,thoda dur mera sansaar hai,
jaha par roshan diya hai aur jalta majaar hai,
mehnat meri aj ki aane wale waqt par udhhaar hai,
ahmiyat meri  teri sansse bankar tere  me sumaar hai,
pawan puchega tu jaha tu abhi nahi jiske liye tu bekraar hai,
chalate rahna bina ruke aaj ke waqt ki bas yahi darkaar hai.
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2012, 09:11:50 PM »
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nice lines...par aapki english version me jo last line hai vo aap hindi version me mention karna bhool gaye hain
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«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2012, 03:39:07 AM »
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मंजिल पर पंहुचते-पंहुचते आज टूटी कतार हे,
आज खडा हूं वहा जहा दोनो तरफ मझधार हे,
मंजिल दिख रही हे मुझको थोडा दुर आज मेरा संसार हे
पर वंही दिखता  रोशन समा हे ओर जलता हुआ मंजार हे,
मेरी आज की मेहनत कोन कहता बेकार हे
मैने इसे की आने वाले कल के वक्त पर उधार हे,
अहमियत मेरी हमेशा रहेगी जब तक   तेरी सांसे मेरे मे शुमार हे,
पवन तुझे पंहुचना हे वहा जहा तु नंही जिसके लिये तु बेकरार हे......


manzil par puchte-puchte tooti aj meri katar hai,
aj khada hu vaha dost jaha bana ek majhdhar hai,
manzil mujko dikhti hai,thoda dur mera sansaar hai,
jaha par roshan diya hai aur jalta majaar hai,
mehnat meri aj ki aane wale waqt par udhhaar hai,
ahmiyat meri  teri sansse bankar tere  me sumaar hai,
pawan puchega tu jaha tu abhi nahi jiske liye tu bekraar hai,
chalate rahna bina ruke aaj ke waqt ki bas yahi darkaar hai.
gd
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«Reply #3 on: September 16, 2012, 04:19:06 AM »
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waah bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2012, 02:57:15 AM »
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