कभी तेरी ख़ुशी में By " Betaab"

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प्रस्तुत रचना थोड़े अलग टाइप क़ी है, हो सकता है आपको पसंद न आये, लेकिन कविता तो कविता है.
यदि पसंद न आये तो माफ़ कर दीजियेगा.

कभी तेरी ख़ुशी में तो कभी तेरे प्यार में सेंध लगाऊँगा,
मैं तो महज एक धोखा हूँ तुझे कभी नज़र नहीं आऊँगा.
 
देखना चाहते हो तो मुझे झूठ के दर्पण में देखो,
मैं तो अँधेरे का एक हिस्सा हूँ  काला ही नज़र आऊँगा.

मुझसे मिलना है तो हर बेवफा के दिल में झांककर दिखो,
उसके दिल के हरेक कोने में बस मैं ही मैं नज़र आऊँगा.


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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2013, 10:32:03 PM »
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प्रस्तुत रचना थोड़े अलग टाइप क़ी है, हो सकता है आपको पसंद न आये, लेकिन कविता तो कविता है.
यदि पसंद न आये तो माफ़ कर दीजियेगा.

कभी तेरी ख़ुशी में तो कभी तेरे प्यार में सेंध लगाऊँगा,
मैं तो महज एक धोखा हूँ तुझे कभी नज़र नहीं आऊँगा.
 
देखना चाहते हो तो मुझे झूठ के दर्पण में देखो,
मैं तो अँधेरे का एक हिस्सा हूँ  काला ही नज़र आऊँगा.

मुझसे मिलना है तो हर बेवफा के दिल में झांककर दिखो,
उसके दिल के हरेक कोने में बस मैं ही मैं नज़र आऊँगा.


            Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab"

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«Reply #10 on: August 05, 2013, 03:23:09 PM »
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