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by goldy_shayar on June 20, 2012, 12:30:20 PM
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वक़्त की बैसाखियों पर तो चलते हैं सभी
बात तो तब है बैसाखियों पर वक़्त चलाये कोई

अपने घर को तो रोशन बनाते हैं सभी
खुद को जला कर दूसरों का घर रोशन बनाए कोई
 
मोहब्बत का दम तो भरते हैं सभी
इस आग में परवाना बनकर खुद को जलाए कोई  
 
सरफरोशी की बातें तो करते हैं सभी
मुल्क की खातिर "गोल्डी" सर तो कटाए कोई
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2012, 12:37:05 PM »
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वक़्त की बैसाखियों पर तो चलते हैं सभी
बात तो तब है बैसाखियों पर वक़्त चलाये कोई
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अपने घर को तो रोशन बनाते हैं सभी
खुद को जला कर दूसरों का घर रोशन बनाए कोई
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मोहब्बत का दम तो भरते हैं सभी
इस आग में परवाना बनकर खुद को जलाए कोई 
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सरफरोशी की बातें तो करते हैं सभी
मुल्क की खातिर "गोल्डी" सर तो कटाए कोई
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bahut khoob kaha Goldy Ji, aapkee is peshkash par aapko dher saari mubaarakbaad aur ek rau bhi
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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2012, 12:44:16 PM »
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Bahut badhiya likha hai goldy jee. Bahut achha laga, meri taraf se dheron daad aur ek Rau.
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2012, 01:37:26 PM »
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bahut khoob dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2012, 02:23:23 PM »
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"BAHUT KHUB BADE BHAIYAA
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2012, 02:25:27 PM »
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bahut acha likha hai aapne goldy jee
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2012, 03:11:35 PM »
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bohot khhob socha jnaab


har samah , har pall yun he guzar jata hai
YE WAQT HAI nah kabi kisi ka hua hai nah ho pata hai
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2012, 05:24:21 PM »
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Bahut umda Goldy jee

Sarfaroshee ...behad umda khayaal,
sab ehsaas karne kee baat hai. Aapko mai baaadab salaam karta hun.



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«Reply #8 on: June 21, 2012, 10:19:03 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Meet Ji is hosla afjaayee ke liye, ghazal likhne kee ye meri pehli koshish thee aur mujhe aap ke vichaaron ko jaankar laga ki mein bhi kuch likh sakta hoon, phir se ek baar bahut bahut shukriya

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«Reply #9 on: June 21, 2012, 10:39:41 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Iftakhar Bhai
Bahut badhiya likha hai goldy jee. Bahut achha laga, meri taraf se dheron daad aur ek Rau.
Bahut badhiya likha hai goldy jee. Bahut achha laga, meri taraf se dheron daad aur ek Rau.
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«Reply #10 on: June 22, 2012, 10:26:30 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Saini Ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 22, 2012, 10:46:59 AM »
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Nice  goldy  ji . Congrats .
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«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2012, 05:20:26 AM »
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Anand Ji
"BAHUT KHUB BADE BHAIYAA
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«Reply #13 on: June 25, 2012, 05:54:20 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Suman Ji
bahut acha likha hai aapne goldy jee
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«Reply #14 on: June 28, 2012, 10:29:27 AM »
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bahut bahut Shukriya Roy Ji
bohot khhob socha jnaab


har samah , har pall yun he guzar jata hai
YE WAQT HAI nah kabi kisi ka hua hai nah ho pata hai
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