चलता हूँ इस बज़म से आख़िरी सलाम हो.!!@Advo.RavinderRavi'Sagar'

by Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 31, 2013, 02:06:02 PM
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हो सकता है ये मेरा आख़िरी पैगाम हो.!
यारो की खिदमत मेरा आख़िरी सलाम हो.!!

बहुत कोशिशें की दुनिया को समझने की.!
हार गया हूँ यारो जीत तुम्हारे नाम हो.!!

बहुत कुछ बचा है लिखने को मुझमे बाकी.!
हो सकता कुछ मे सुनने का अरमान हो.!!

जब तक है जान जिगर मे लिखता रहूँगा.!
ना जाने कौन सा मेरा आख़िरी कलाम हो.!!

खुश रहना प्यार बाँटना और हंसते रहना.!
चलता हूँ इस बज़म से आख़िरी सलाम हो.!!


Ho sakta hai ye mera Aakhiri Paigam ho.!
Yaaro ki Khidmat mera Aakhiri Salam ho.!!
Bahut koshishein ki Duniya ko samjhne ki.!
Haar gaya hun Yaaro Jeet tumahare naam ho.!!
Bahut kuch bachaa hai likhne ko mujh me baaki.!
Ho sakta kuch me mujhe ab bhi sunne ka Armaan ho.!!
Jab tak hai Jaan Jigar me likhta rahunga.!
Na jaane koun sa mera Aakhiri Kalaam ho.!!
Khush rahna Pyaar baantna aur Hanste rahna.!
Chalta hun is Bzam se Aakhiri Salaam ho.!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 31, 2013, 02:16:30 PM »
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हो सकता है ये मेरा आख़िरी पैगाम हो.!
यारो की खिदमत मेरा आख़िरी सलाम हो.!!

बहुत कोशिशें की दुनिया को समझने की.!
हार गया हूँ यारो जीत तुम्हारे नाम हो.!!

बहुत कुछ बचा है लिखने को मुझमे बाकी.!
हो सकता कुछ मे सुनने का अरमान हो.!!

जब तक है जान जिगर मे लिखता रहूँगा.!
ना जाने कों सा मेरा आख़िरी कलाम हो.!!

खुश रहना प्यार बाँटना और हंसते रहना.!
चलता हूँ इस बज़म आख़िरी सलाम हो.!!


Ho sakta hai ye mera Aakhiri Paigam ho.!
Yaaro ki Khidmat mera Aakhiri Salam ho.!!
Bahut koshishein ki Duniya ko samjhne ki.!
Haar gaya hun Yaaro Jeet tumahare naam ho.!!
Bahut kuch bachaa hai likhne ko mujh me baaki.!
Ho sakta kuch me mujhe ab bhi sunne ka Armaan ho.!!
Jab tak hai Jaan Jigar me likhta rahunga.!
Na jaane kon sa mera Aakhiri Kalaam ho.!!
Khush rahna Pyaar baantna aur Hanste rahna.!
Chalta hun is Bzam ko Aakhiri Salaam ho.!!



atee sundar, vaise yaaron se itnee naaraajgee theek nahee.
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«Reply #2 on: July 31, 2013, 02:23:30 PM »
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naheen bhaai naheen naheen naheen
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«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2013, 02:51:54 PM »
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bahut khoob, par aisa nahi kariyega janab
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«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2013, 02:53:31 PM »
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dost kaha chale ja rahe ho
salaam akhiri kare ja rahe ho
chale jao magar yeh to bataoo
rishte dosti ke kyo bhulaye ja rahe ho

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«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2013, 03:50:20 PM »
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Heart touching...
Bhagwan aapko lambi umar de aur aap yon hi likhte rahen...
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«Reply #7 on: July 31, 2013, 04:37:59 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: July 31, 2013, 06:00:59 PM »
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Yaar Doston Ki Mahfil Se Kabhi Jaya Nahi Karte,

Bahut Khoob...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2013, 06:42:16 PM »
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Awesome creation Ravi ji...but kaise nahi karna ji...
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«Reply #10 on: July 31, 2013, 08:52:39 PM »
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Ye kya Ravi jee, aap YoIndia chorr rahe ho kya?? Ya aise hi likha hai.
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«Reply #11 on: August 01, 2013, 02:29:41 AM »
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ama! jaane ko kah rahe ho ya jaane ko kah rahe ho!

i mean jaane ko bata rahe ho ya jaane ko kah rahe ho!  Giggle Giggle Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

but if u r serious to ye kahunga mat jaao!
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«Reply #12 on: August 01, 2013, 12:20:08 PM »
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ज़नाब क्या उम्दा कलाम है, बहुत खूब,  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
पर इस महफ़िल को आखरी सलाम क्यूँ??? सर ऐसा न कीजिये, बच्चो का दिल टूट जायेगा
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«Reply #13 on: August 01, 2013, 01:42:01 PM »
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bahut khoob ravi ji.. likhte rahiye aur bazm mein aate rahiye...
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«Reply #14 on: August 02, 2013, 05:05:49 PM »
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bahut khoob .. Usual Smile Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ish bazm-e-chaman ka ek phool hai aap..

aate rahiye ravi ji ..
god bless you..
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