जीने की अदा

by ritika senrit on July 18, 2015, 10:23:04 AM
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हम दोस्तों से जो चाहे वो दुआ ले जाये,
फिर खुदा जाने किधर हमको ये हवा ले जाये,

रात भर दिल की किवाड़ों को खुला रखता हूँ,
जाने कब आके कोई हमको बुला ले जाये,

हम तो कुछ देने के काबिल ही कहाँ हैं लेकिन,
हाँ कोई चाहे तो जीने की अदा ले जाये.
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«Reply #1 on: July 18, 2015, 11:00:11 AM »
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बहुत ही खूब.....

बहुत ही बढ़िया ग़ज़ल बन रही है इसे पूरा जरुर करें......
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«Reply #2 on: July 23, 2015, 08:23:05 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2015, 10:11:00 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 25, 2015, 11:45:46 AM »
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bohat khubb waaaaahhhhhhh
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