पन्नो से जुडकर........

by pawan16 on October 02, 2012, 07:49:43 AM
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मैं एक कविता  बन गया हूं,
पन्नो से जुडकर,
अपनी कलम मे रम गया हू,
दुर आसमान मे खुशबू मेरी,
मानो  हसीन गुलाब से रंग गया हू,
अलफाजो को सजाये हुये,
एक उडती पंतग बन गया हूं,
एक मदहोशी,
एक लुभाती तंरग बन गया हू.
तेरा एक एहसास,
आज लगा मैं पवन बन गया हूं
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«Reply #1 on: October 02, 2012, 07:53:10 AM »
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bahut khub pawan ji
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«Reply #2 on: October 02, 2012, 08:08:05 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah kya baat hai pawan  Applause
bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaas bayaan kiya hai aapne.
par mujhe aapse bahut si ummeede rahti hai..
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«Reply #3 on: October 02, 2012, 08:29:46 AM »
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bahut khoob pawan ji dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: October 02, 2012, 08:59:51 AM »
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मैं एक कविता  बन गया हूं,
पन्नो से जुडकर,
अपनी कलम मे रम गया हू,
दुर आसमान मे खुशबू मेरी,
मानो  हसीन गुलाब से रंग गया हू,
अलफाजो को सजाये हुये,
एक उडती पंतग बन गया हूं,
एक मदहोशी,
एक लुभाती तंरग बन गया हू.
तेरा एक एहसास,
आज लगा मैं पवन बन गया हूं
nice
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«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2012, 12:54:07 AM »
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bahut khoob pavan ji
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