मेरी मौत पर भी मुस्क़ुरा देना.!!@Advo.RavinderRavi'Sagar'

by Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 11, 2013, 02:14:36 PM
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मेरे हाल पर हँसने वालो हो सके तो,
मेरी मौत पर भी मुस्क़ुरा देना.!
जब उठने को हो जनाज़ा मेरा,
तुम दो अश्क कहीं ना बहा देना.!!
हंसते थे जैसे मुझ पर तुम,
वैसे ही हंसते रहना.!
गमगीन महोल को सुना लतीफ़ा कोई,
दुनिया को फिर हंसा देना.!!
उमर भर मुझ पर हंसते रहे,
अब क्यूँ रोने आए हो.!
बचा है कोई और क़र्ज़ मुझ पर,
तो मुस्क़ुरा वो भी चढ़ा लेना.!!

Mere haal par hansne waalo ho sake to,
Meri Mout par bhi Musqura dena.!
Jab Uthne ko ho janaja mera,
Tum Do Ashk kahin na baha dena.!!
Hanste the jaise mujh par tum,
Waise hi hanste rahna.!
Gamgeen  Mahol ko Suna Latifa Koyi,
Duniya ko phir hansa dena.!!
Umar bhar mujh par hanste rahe,
Ab kyun rone aaye ho.!
Bacha hai koyi aur karz mujh par,
To Musqura wo bhi chdha lena.!!
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2013, 02:45:33 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2013, 03:10:55 PM »
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Bahut badhiya likha hai Ravinder jee aapne
khaas taur se shuruati lines..
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WAAH WAAH BAHUT KHOOB............ Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2013, 03:32:13 PM »
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 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower WAAH WAAH BAHUT SUNDER
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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2013, 04:12:41 PM »
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Mere haal par hansne waalo ho sake to,
Meri Mout par bhi Musqura dena.!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaaaah ravi ji.. umda peshkash.. bahut hi pyaare ehsaas rahe.. dheron dheron daad..
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«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2013, 10:10:39 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah Ravi ji, bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2013, 11:16:36 PM »
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waah kya baat hai ravi jee..

chha gaye aap to..

bahut pasand aayi mujhe..

dhero daad rau ke saath..happy9
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«Reply #9 on: September 11, 2013, 11:45:03 PM »
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Shuqriya Nandbahuji.
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: September 11, 2013, 11:47:05 PM »
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Thanks a lot.
Quote from: mkv on September 11, 2013, 03:10:55 PM
Bahut badhiya likha hai Ravinder jee aapne
khaas taur se shuruati lines..
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«Reply #11 on: September 11, 2013, 11:48:20 PM »
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Quote from: Miraj. on September 11, 2013, 03:28:11 PM
WAAH WAAH BAHUT KHOOB............ Applause Applause Applause Applause
शुक़रिया मिराज जी.
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«Reply #12 on: September 11, 2013, 11:50:43 PM »
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धन्यवाद सैनी सर.
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icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower WAAH WAAH BAHUT SUNDER
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«Reply #13 on: September 11, 2013, 11:52:21 PM »
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धन्यवाद Iqtedarji.
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Mere haal par hansne waalo ho sake to,
Meri Mout par bhi Musqura dena.!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: September 11, 2013, 11:53:43 PM »
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आपका बहुत  बहुत शुक़रिया अक़्सजी.
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaaaah ravi ji.. umda peshkash.. bahut hi pyaare ehsaas rahe.. dheron dheron daad..
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