मैं नादान आ गया******************ALFAAZ

by alfaaz on April 06, 2015, 02:45:30 PM
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एक बूँद पानी क्या तेरे बालों से गिरा तूफ़ान आ गया
 मैं उसी बूँद को  बज्म मे सुनाकर मेरी जान आ गया

सब्र रख तेरे घरवालों को जल्द ही होश आ जायेगा  
 सिर्फ तेरा हाथ ही तो मांगकर मैं नादान आ गया

फाँसलें मिटाने थे पर फाँसले ही दगा कर गये
बात मेरी पूरी हुइ नही के  तेरा मकान आ गया

लता दीदी को फ़िर एक बार पुकारना पडेगा
शहिद होकर देश का और एक जवान आ गया

"राज" बचपन मे बहुत मोटा था पर
 माँ कहती  मेरा पेहेलवान आ गया
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«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2015, 04:29:00 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2015, 07:02:01 PM »
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एक बूँद पानी क्या तेरे बालों से गिरा तूफ़ान आ गया
 मैं उसी बूँद को  बज्म मे सुनाकर मेरी जान आ गया

सब्र रख तेरे घरवालों को जल्द ही होश आ जायेगा 
 सिर्फ तेरा हाथ ही तो मांगकर मैं नादान आ गया

फाँसलें मिटाने थे पर फाँसले ही दगा कर गये
बात मेरी पूरी हुइ नही के  तेरा मकान आ गया

लता दीदी को फ़िर एक बार पुकारना पडेगा
शहिद होकर देश का और एक जवान आ गया

"राज" बचपन मे बहुत मोटा था पर
 माँ कहती  मेरा पेहेलवान आ गया
bahut hee umdah, dheroooooN daaaaaaaaaaaad.
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I think last Misraa will sound better if you say it like as under:
"Raj" bachhpan mein motaa to nahin thaa...
Maan kehtee meraa pehalwaan aa.gayaa
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2015, 04:12:21 AM »
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bahut khub.....
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2015, 04:18:08 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2015, 05:12:59 PM »
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अति सुंदर  Applause Applause icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2015, 04:31:41 AM »
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