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by srishti raj chintak on June 13, 2013, 06:47:38 PM
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जाने ये कैसा जहाँ है ?
शेरों की मशीनें हैं
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सभी बेहतरीन हैं, सभी उम्दा हैं
किसको मैं छोड़ दूँ ?
किसको मैं दाद दूँ ?
लगता है यहाँ तो
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2013, 07:35:41 PM »
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bahut khoob..
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2013, 02:31:22 AM »
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bahut khub srishti Ji


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2013, 07:38:42 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2013, 07:55:31 PM »
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hahahahaha saaheb bas padha kijiye sabko, isi me maza hai, aur jab lage ki nahiN jawaab to banta hai, to jawaab de diya kijiye... aasaan sa tareeka hai....!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2013, 12:12:23 AM »
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जाने ये कैसा जहाँ है ?
शेरों की मशीनें हैं
गजलों की फैक्ट्रियाँ हैं
सभी बेहतरीन हैं, सभी उम्दा हैं
किसको मैं छोड़ दूँ ?
किसको मैं दाद दूँ ?
लगता है यहाँ तो
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2013, 12:21:26 AM »
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Kya baat hai..

Badi kashmakash main hai aap..

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«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2013, 08:14:56 PM »
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Many many thanks and regards to all.
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