लिखने के अपने इस किरदार मे............

by pawan16 on October 10, 2012, 03:50:42 PM
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लिखने के अपने इस किरदार मे,
रुख बदले हे हम अपना संसार मे,
कहते हे सब अनछूए अहसास ,अलफाज हे,
मानो जेसे हो धार किसी तलवार मे.
तुमने ही बदली हे ये फिजा,
आज इस मचलती बहार मे,
मिलते रहना यू ही हमसे पवन,
की गयी अपनी छोटी सी पुकार मे,
वादा किये हे हम खुद से,
गुजरेगे जंहा हम अभी नंही,
एक दिन मिंलेगे धरती के सम्पूण आकार मे.......पवन
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«Reply #1 on: October 10, 2012, 04:20:10 PM »
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Pawan ji v v nice creation
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«Reply #2 on: October 10, 2012, 04:27:17 PM »
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लिखने के अपने इस किरदार मे,
रुख बदले हे हम अपना संसार मे,
कहते हे सब अनछूए अहसास ,अलफाज हे,
मानो जेसे हो धार किसी तलवार मे.
तुमने ही बदली हे ये फिजा,
आज इस मचलती बहार मे,
मिलते रहना यू ही हमसे पवन,
की गयी अपनी छोटी सी पुकार मे,
वादा किये हे हम खुद से,
गुजरेगे जंहा हम अभी नंही,
एक दिन मिंलेगे धरती के सम्पूण आकार मे.......पवन

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«Reply #4 on: October 10, 2012, 05:37:25 PM »
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Pawan Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab... badi achche kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile

Ahsaas O khayaal bhi aik se badhkar aik rahe janab..
Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile


And HaaN Pawan jee post kisi bhi written launguge meiN kare
par tittle sirf roman english meiN hi dijiyeNga... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: October 11, 2012, 04:53:38 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #7 on: October 11, 2012, 10:17:51 AM »
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gooooooooooood...
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nice post pawan ji congratulations
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