Aaj kal Iman kya.... manjum

by manjum on April 09, 2011, 04:43:53 AM
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ye rachna jab Shri Annaji ne ansan par baithe tab likhi thi.. aaj wo jeet ke baad apna ansan tod rahe hain... to socha aap sab se share kar li jaye.....

Zindgi Souda nahin, hai nafa nuksan kya.
Sans bhi gin gin ke le, wo bhala insan kya.

Chand sikkon ke lie jo,dagmaga jaye kadam,
Isko kahte hain kaho, aajkal iman kya.

Aadmi sare jahan ke, jab mashini ho gaye,
Zindgi ki baat kya aur, maut ka saman kya.

Ye samjh aata nahin, laash hai ya aadmi,
Zinda hain ya mar chuke, hai bachi pahchan kya.

Ghumte sab log hain, hath main khanzar lie,
Ese main tum kar rahe "mann", jine ka arman kya.

Ek dafa jo kam aaye, Umar bhar taana wo den,
Ese logon se lena, "mann" koi ehasan kya.

manju "mann"


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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2011, 04:59:22 AM »
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no cmnt …for dis post
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2011, 05:00:29 AM »
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are niralaji... kuchh to kahie... ye no cmnt kyo...
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2011, 05:03:33 AM »
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alfaaz nai he
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manjum
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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2011, 05:05:49 AM »
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hunnn....
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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2011, 05:14:54 AM »
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ye rachna jab Shri Annaji ne ansan par baithe tab likhi thi.. aaj wo jeet ke baad apna ansan tod rahe hain... to socha aap sab se share kar li jaye.....

Zindgi Souda nahin, hai nafa nuksan kya.
Sans bhi gin gin ke le, wo bhala insan kya.

Chand sikkon ke lie jo,dagmaga jaye kadam,
Isko kahte hain kaho, aajkal iman kya.

Aadmi sare jahan ke, jab mashini ho gaye,
Zindgi ki baat kya aur, maut ka saman kya.

Ye samjh aata nahin, laash hai ya aadmi,
Zinda hain ya mar chuke, hai bachi pahchan kya.

Ghumte sab log hain, hath main khanzar lie,
Ese main tum kar rahe "mann", jine ka arman kya.

Ek dafa jo kam aaye, Umar bhar taana wo den,
Ese logon se lena, "mann" koi ehasan kya.

manju "mann"


Bahut Sacche aur Acche Ashaar Kahe hai aapne iss baar .. Manjum Ji ! iss umdaa soch ke liye ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai .. qubuul farmaayeN ... yunhi hi behtreen kalaam sunaate rahen .. khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath .. !
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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2011, 05:17:48 AM »
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bahutbahut shukriya... anshuji....

aapki daad sar aankho par... yunhi sath rahige.....
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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2011, 06:50:54 AM »
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manju ji........

aapki lagbhag sabhi post read ki he abtak .........juthi baat to mujse hoti nahi so sach kahu to ye sabse best he abtak ki......aur isme theme to behtar he hi but sabse badi baat isme apne rythm kahi nahi mis ki......jo ki aksar apki post me 3rd ya 4th para me mis ho hi jati he......aur jo subject apne chose kiya he wo to bas har insan ke dil ki baat he........

thx for sharing this post with us.........
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2011, 06:54:04 AM »
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bht hi umda peshkash manju ji....
Is tarah ke subject par itna accha likhna sab ke bas ki baaat nahi hai...
Hats of to u.....
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2011, 07:02:59 AM »
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ye rachna jab Shri Annaji ne ansan par baithe tab likhi thi.. aaj wo jeet ke baad apna ansan tod rahe hain... to socha aap sab se share kar li jaye.....

Zindgi Souda nahin, hai nafa nuksan kya.
Sans bhi gin gin ke le, wo bhala insan kya.

Chand sikkon ke lie jo,dagmaga jaye kadam,
Isko kahte hain kaho, aajkal iman kya.

Aadmi sare jahan ke, jab mashini ho gaye,
Zindgi ki baat kya aur, maut ka saman kya.

Ye samjh aata nahin, laash hai ya aadmi,
Zinda hain ya mar chuke, hai bachi pahchan kya.

Ghumte sab log hain, hath main khanzar lie,
Ese main tum kar rahe "mann", jine ka arman kya.

Ek dafa jo kam aaye, Umar bhar taana wo den,
Ese logon se lena, "mann" koi ehasan kya.

manju "mann"




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One Of Ur Best Work Anju..Har Ashaar gehre Aur Sateek..

Lajawaab Anju..Bahut Ache Thumbs UP Thumbs UP


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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2011, 07:11:15 AM »
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Bahut Khub Manjum Ji Bahut Hi Accha Likha Hai Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2011, 07:25:04 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya metrixji.... aap ki baat yaad rakhene aage likhte waqt... bahut bahut shukriya...

sath rahiyega.......
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«Reply #12 on: April 09, 2011, 07:26:21 AM »
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bahutbahut shukriya priyaji...

bas aap sab sath dete rahen fir ham bhi kuchh kuchh likhne ki koshish karte rahenge....

sath rahie......
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«Reply #13 on: April 09, 2011, 07:28:30 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji.... aapne pada aur pasand kiya....

yun hi sath rahiega....
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«Reply #14 on: April 09, 2011, 07:29:21 AM »
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bahutbahut shukriya rishiji....

yun hi sath rahiega.....
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