Betiyan

by sapnaa on October 11, 2007, 04:43:41 PM
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ooss ki boond si hoti hai Betiyan...
Papa ki dulaari aur jaan se pyaari
hoti hai Betiyan....
sparsh khurdara ho to roti hai Betiyan....

Beta to ek hi kul ka hota hai
do do kul ki laaj hoti hai Betiyan....
Heera agar hai Beta to sachmuch
Moti hai Betiyan.....

Kaanto ki raah pe chalti hai Betiyan
auro ki raah mein phool banti hai Betiyan
kehne ko to parayi amanat hoti hai Betiyan
par Beton se bi apni hoti hai Betiyan....
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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2007, 06:45:20 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai bahoot hi acha likha hai sapnaa... man khush ho gaya,... bahoot sahi kaha do do kul ki laaj hoti hai betiya...

Nanhi si pyari si dulari si betiya
Mummy ki ankhon ki chaht si betiya

Bhaio ki ankhon ka tara si betiyan
Baap ki hansi ka khazana sa betiyan

Chum chum karati runjhun si betiya
Khilkhilati her dum rahe, her ek ki betiyan
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2007, 07:49:40 PM »
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Sapnaa, Pooja

Superb ! =D> =D> =D>

Aap dono ne bahut he pyara likha hai !

Mujhe bhi bahut pyari hai meri beti :hug: :D

Aise he achcha likhte rahiye !
Bahut pyari hoti hain betiyan !
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2007, 08:19:25 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB SAPNAA...AAP NE JO BHI LIKHA HAI..IS DIL KO CHU GAYI...POOJA BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI..RAJBIR SACH KAHA AAPNE...
BETIYAN HAMESHA PAPA KI LAADLI HOTI HAI...
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2007, 10:21:53 AM »
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Sapnaa Pooja, very nice !
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2007, 01:37:49 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai bahoot hi acha likha hai sapnaa... man khush ho gaya,... bahoot sahi kaha do do kul ki laaj hoti hai betiya...

Nanhi si pyari si dulari si betiya
Mummy ki ankhon ki chaht si betiya

Bhaio ki ankhon ka tara si betiyan
Baap ki hansi ka khazana sa betiyan

Chum chum karati runjhun si betiya
Khilkhilati her dum rahe, her ek ki betiyan


Pooja di bahut hi accha likha hai aapne. Betiyan ghar ki shaan hote hai.
Mujhe bahut accha laga padkar.
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2011, 10:50:36 AM »
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ooss ki boond si hoti hai Betiyan...
Papa ki dulaari aur jaan se pyaari
hoti hai Betiyan....
sparsh khurdara ho to roti hai Betiyan....

Beta to ek hi kul ka hota hai
do do kul ki laaj hoti hai Betiyan....
Heera agar hai Beta to sachmuch
Moti hai Betiyan.....

Kaanto ki raah pe chalti hai Betiyan
auro ki raah mein phool banti hai Betiyan
kehne ko to parayi amanat hoti hai Betiyan
par Beton se bi apni hoti hai Betiyan....
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jaipur-amit
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«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2011, 06:29:05 PM »
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ye line bhi add kar de
takdir walon ke janm leti hai betiya
ghar ki laxmi hoti hai betiya

main aap sabhi se ek reqvest karna chata ho ki wo bhi hamari betiyan hi hai jin hone apna bacpan kahi kho diya hai ye massom hai aao inhe hum ek naai rosni de khil khilane ka moka de meri bhi 1 saal ki masoom beti hai bhut payari se jab use dekhta hon to mujhe wo sab betiya meri ankhon ke samne aajati hai aap ne bhut hi acha likha hai main bhut sukriya karta hon ki apne ye likha thenk u icon_flower
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«Reply #8 on: October 16, 2011, 06:15:15 PM »
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Betiyaan to sirf ek ehsaas hoti hain ♥ ♥ ♥
Some of the most beautiful words for daughters

♥ Kya likhun ? ? ? ? ?
Ki woh pariyon ka roop hoti hai…♥
Ya kadakti thand mein suhaani dhoop hoti hai…♥
Wo hoti hai udaasi ke har marz ki dawa ki tarah…♥
Ya os mein sheetal hawa ki tarah…♥
Woh chidiyon ki chehchahahat hai...♥
Ya ke nishchal khilkilahat hai...♥
Woh aangan mein faila ujaala hai..♥
Ya mere gusse pe laga taala hai…♥
Woh pahad ki choti pe suraj ki kiran hai…♥
Ya zindagi sahi jeene ka aacharan hai…♥
Hai woh takat jo chote se ghar ko mahal bana de…♥
Hai woh kaafiya jo kisi gazal ko mukkamal kar de…♥
Kya likhun ??…
Woh akshar jo na ho toh varn maala adhoori hai…
Woh, jo sabse zaada zaroori hai…
Ye nahi kahoonga ki woh har waqt saath saath hoti hai,
Betiyaan toh sirf ek ehsaas hoti hain ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Thanks to the father who has written these BEAUTIFUL lines :')
♥ ♥ love ma papa a lot ♥ ♥
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