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HOLI KE RANG AMBER PE CHHANE LAGE
WO HAME PHIR BAHUT YAAD AANE LAGE
UNKO CHHOONE KI KHWAISH UMADANE LAGI
DIL ME ARMAAN HALCHAL MACHAANE LAGE
MAN HI MAN ME HUIN KITNI TAIYARIAN
HASRATON KE GULON SE BHARI KYARIAN
DOOR SAARI HUI AAJ BIMARIAN
JAB TARANGON ME SAAGAR SAMAANE LAGE
DEKHNA HAI ABHI JO KHAYALON ME HAI
CHHOONA HAI WO ABHI JO SAWALON ME HAI
AISA KAM HAI ABHI JO UJALON ME HAI
AB ANDHERE HAME GUDGUDAANE LAGE
BHAGENGE TO BAHUT WO IDHAR SE UDHAR
UNKO JAANE NA DOONGA MAIN BACHKAR MAGAR
UNKE ANURODH KA PHIR NA HOGA ASAR
CHAHE KITANE HI WO KASMASAANE LAGE
UNPE RANGEEN PHOOLON KA RAS CHHOD KAR
KAR HI DALUNGA UNKA BADAN TARBATAR
BHEEGANE SE WO AAENGE AISE NAZAR
TAJ JYON BARISHON ME NAHANE LAGE
HOLI AAYEE HAME JODANE KE LIYE
SARE SHIKAVE GILE CHHODANE KE LIYE
AB NAHIN KOI DIL TODANE KE LIYE
JAB KI RANGON KI GANGA BAHAANE LAGE
SARVESH RASTOGI
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sarveshrastogi1960@yahoo.co.uk
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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2010, 04:07:02 PM » |
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Waah Waah Sarvesh ji.. Holi Ke Rango mea bhi Khumaar Bhar diya aapne.. Sach mea Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorat likha hai .. Bahoot Umda !
Happy Holi !
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«Reply #3 on: February 28, 2010, 05:04:04 AM » |
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Wah wah Rastogi ji bahut achhi lagi aapki ye poem. Holi par kisi ke yaad aane ka bada achha varnan kiya aapne. Beautiful words and nice creation.
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«Reply #4 on: February 28, 2010, 05:54:26 AM » |
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SARVESH RASTOGI JI.
BAHUT KHOOB IMAGINATION HAI AAPKI.
BAHUT ACHHE SE EXPRESS KIYA HAI.
AAPSE GUJARISH HUMEN BHI AISE COLOURFUL LIKHNA SIKHAYEN.
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2010, 06:04:36 AM » |
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Waah Waah Sarvesh ji.. Hili Ke Rango mea bhi Khumaar Bhar diya aapne.. Sach mea Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorat likha hai .. Bahoot Umda !
Happy Holi !
Bahut bahut shukriya Sophi Ji Meri rachna pathakon ko pasand aaye isi me meri kamyabi hai Thanks a lot Happy Holi SARVESH RASTOGI |
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«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2010, 06:39:16 AM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhuwesh Ji badi inspiration milti hai aapse, thanks a lot Happy Holi SARVESH RASTOGI |
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«Reply #7 on: February 28, 2010, 09:16:28 AM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI SARVESH RASTOGI JI....
AAJ YE HAATH SE MAUKA NAHI KHONA HAI
UNKA ANG ANG "HOLI KE RANG" SE BHIGONA HAI
AAJ APNE PYAAR KA IZHAAR KARNA HAI
HAR HAAL MEIN APNI KHWAISH POORI KARNA HAI..
HOLI MUBARAK....
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«Reply #8 on: February 28, 2010, 09:47:09 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: February 28, 2010, 10:25:59 AM » |
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bahoot hi sunder likha hai sarvesh ji...aapki likhi sabhi kavitayen gungunane ka jee karta hai.....badi sadhi hui lay hai aapki...saath hi vishay par aapki pakad bhi bani rahti hai...dheron shubhkamanyen ..is rachna ko bhi aaur aapko bhi
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«Reply #10 on: February 28, 2010, 10:31:37 AM » |
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WAH
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«Reply #11 on: February 28, 2010, 12:16:22 PM » |
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Wah wah Rastogi ji bahut achhi lagi aapki ye poem. Holi par kisi ke yaad aane ka bada achha varnan kiya aapne. Beautiful words and nice creation.
Bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz Ji Aap jaise kadardaan hon to likhne ka maza aata hai Meharbani SARVESH RASTOGI |
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«Reply #14 on: February 28, 2010, 03:04:46 PM » |
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SARVESH RASTOGI JI.
BAHUT KHOOB IMAGINATION HAI AAPKI.
BAHUT ACHHE SE EXPRESS KIYA HAI.
AAPSE GUJARISH HUMEN BHI AISE COLOURFUL LIKHNA SIKHAYEN.
Lot of Thanks Sangwan Ji Khubsurat shabdon me aapne tarif ki hai, thanks again Ye to aapki vinamrata hai varna aap to khud bhi bada khoob likhte hain, very nice Hausla badhate rahiye SARVESH RASTOGI |
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