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Ye Basant!!!!
Ye Basant!!
Tum aaye Dhara par
sampurn sristi
rang gayi
tumhare hi rang main..
Hui Basanti
har ek disha
chahun or
phoole phool palas ke..
O!! Basant!!!
yun aayo
pyare phoolon se
dharti ka aanchal rangte ho...
Is dharti ke
anchal par tum
bahut sajte ho....
Ab dharti ki tarah
Mann anbar main bhi aa jao...
In Pyare rango se
Mann ki sristi bhi rang jao...
Chahun or chhitak kar
bikhare ho....
ab mann ke Nayanon main bas jao...
manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2011, 07:12:40 AM » |
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uff kamaal ka post ji.
agr mujhme shabdo ko feel karne ki kabiliyat hai to ye kahuna ki behtareen ehsaas aur dard ka milawat hai isme.
daad daad
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«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2011, 07:17:04 AM » |
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shukkriya niralaji...
sath rahie.....
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«Reply #4 on: March 26, 2011, 07:39:03 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji.... aapke padne.. aur pasand karne ke lie.... dhanyawad aapka... ke ehsah aap tk pahunche....
sath rahie...
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«Reply #5 on: March 27, 2011, 10:45:29 AM » |
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Hello, I'm remodelled to the forum turned up here to seek cure and your talented hearts.
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«Reply #6 on: March 28, 2011, 02:59:28 AM » |
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thanks Atoseeaseskji....
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«Reply #7 on: March 28, 2011, 03:16:22 AM » |
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o ! basant...
wah wah
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«Reply #8 on: March 28, 2011, 03:20:02 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya KBji........
sath rahie...
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«Reply #9 on: March 28, 2011, 03:21:40 AM » |
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Ye Basant!!!!
Ye Basant!!
Tum aaye Dhara par
sampurn sristi
rang gayi
tumhare hi rang main..
Hui Basanti
har ek disha
chahun or
phoole phool palas ke..
O!! Basant!!!
yun aayo
pyare phoolon se
dharti ka aanchal rangte ho...
Is dharti ke
anchal par tum
bahut sajte ho....
Ab dharti ki tarah
Mann anbar main bhi aa jao...
In Pyare rango se
Mann ki sristi bhi rang jao...
Chahun or chhitak kar
bikhare ho....
ab mann ke Nayanon main bas jao...
manju "mann"
Very Nice & Sweet Poetry .... Manjum JI ! ehsaas mann ko chhuu ke jaate hai ... sheetal pawan ki tarhaa... bahut pasand aai hume aapki kavita ... ! dil se daad hazir hai ... Qubuul FarmaayeN ... ! |
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«Reply #10 on: March 28, 2011, 03:28:32 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya anshuji.... aapki daad sar aankhon par..... ynhi sath rahie......
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«Reply #11 on: March 28, 2011, 04:09:19 AM » |
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nice poetry manjumji.  yo par dusre kaviyon ko bhi hindi kavitaen likhni chahie. hindi kavita kho rahi hai. |
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«Reply #12 on: March 28, 2011, 04:24:16 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya tamnnaji...... sach kaha aapne hindi kavita bhi yo par prastut hoti rahe to acha hai....... ese dost jo hindi kavitae hi likhte hain unhe bhi apne lie yo par jagah dikhai dene lagegi.... jo abhi missing hai... aur hindi likhne walon ko lagta hai ki ye shero shayari ka fourm hai.... yaha kavitao ko jagah nahin mile shayad.... kam se kam mujhe ye kaviyta post karte hue esa laga tha......
thanks ki aapne pasand kia...
sath rahiega.....
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«Reply #13 on: March 29, 2011, 07:31:35 PM » |
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Люди, давайте творить добро! Давайте показывать друг другу, что всё-таки жизнь прексная и доброта превыше всего!
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«Reply #14 on: March 30, 2011, 03:03:12 AM » |
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Andrvinji... maf kijie.....aapne kya likha samjh main nahin aa raha...
shukriya....
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