Gazal : Kabhi to asman se Chaand utre Jaam ho jaaye.

by R.M. Dixit on November 20, 2010, 01:35:22 PM
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  Kabhi to jamin pe chaand utre jaam ho jaaye
              Tumare naam ki ek khoob suret shaam ho jaye.

              Mujhe maloom hai uska thikana phir kahan hoga
              Parinda asman chune main naakam ho jaye.

              Ajeb haalat main dil ka sauda hogaya aakhir
              Mohabbat ki haveli jistareh neelaam ho jaaye.

              Main ehtiyatan udher se kem guzerta huin
              koi masoom kyon mere khatir badnaam ho jaye.

              Ujale apni yaadon ke hamare saath rahne do
              Na jane kis gali main zindgi ki shaam ho jaye
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2010, 10:27:28 PM »
"Main ehtiyatan udher se kam guzarta hoon,
Koi masoom kyun mere khatir badnaam ho jaye.."

Bahaut bahaut khoob..!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 21, 2010, 07:59:38 AM »
dixit ji. bahaut hi umda ghazal hai. behad khoobsurat ehsaas aur bayaan.
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«Reply #3 on: November 21, 2010, 08:09:13 AM »


            Thanks Rahim Miyan aapne
             AApne gazal ko pasand kiya
            daad se nawaja.
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«Reply #4 on: November 22, 2010, 01:09:55 AM »
Dixit jee! Baseer 'Badra'saaheb kaa ye shair bahut pasand kiyaa gayaa.....

Ujaale apnee yaadoN ke humaare saath rahne do
na jaane kis gali me zindagee kee shaam ho jaaye

Bahut achchha hotaa aap unkaa naam bhee yahaaN likhte ...thanks 4 nice sharing...
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«Reply #5 on: November 22, 2010, 06:14:30 AM »
khwahish bas itni hai..
zindagi ki har dua me aaapka saath ho jaye,
kabhi to chand jameen pe utre or saari roshni humare naam ho jaye!!!
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bahut khoobsurat Ghazal likhi aapne Dixit sahab..bahut umda:)Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: November 24, 2010, 05:35:39 PM »
Dixit jee! Baseer 'Badra'saaheb kaa ye shair bahut pasand kiyaa gayaa.....

Ujaale apnee yaadoN ke humaare saath rahne do

                   Mamta aapne baja pnphermaya
                   ye bashir Badra ki hi gazal.
                   Derasal koi space nahin thi
                   jahan shayer ka naam likhna ho.
                   Aapne bhi khoob pehchana.
                   Na jane kis gali main zindgi ki
                   Shaam ho jaye. Please batayen aur
                   kis Shayer ki kaunsi gazal aapko
                   pasand hai. Main pesh kerdunga.
                   So nice of u. Bye Bye.    
 

 


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«Reply #7 on: November 24, 2010, 05:40:44 PM »


                    Hi Kilbill,
                    Thanks for attending and offering
                    your favourable comments on the
                    gazal of Bashir badra presented by
                    me.All the Best. bye Bye.
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