i dnt got ne title........

by apriya on December 13, 2010, 07:28:05 PM
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yu hi raaho me chalte chalte
kab kaun kaha mil jaaye
kise pata hota hai kab
raashte manjilo me dhal jaaye

kya pata kab koi begana
kisi apne ki bhaati
anchahe hi man ko bhaa jaye
kya pata kab kaun apna
begano sa pes aaye

aksar muskilo me
apne bhi saath chhod jaate hai
par yeh mumkin bhi to nahi
ki har muskil me kisi ka saath nibhaya jaaye

galtiya har insaan se hoti hai
par ye kaha tak jayaz hai ki
kisi ki ek khataa ki khaatir
usse taumra nafrat ki jaaye
jab hum khud ko apni
galtiyo ki saja na de paaye
to kyu kisi aur ko
dosi thehraya jaaye

ANAND KUMAR"APRIYA"
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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2010, 07:54:37 PM »
Aadaab Janab !

Kia khoob ahsaas kahe hai aapne hume behad achchi lagi
aapki yeH kalaam....
And first four lines are raly mindblowing ....  Applause Applause Applause

Aisi hi kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye....


Khush O aabad rahiye..
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«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2010, 08:45:56 PM »
bahut accha likh hai aapne.....specially last four lines.....bahut gehri baat kahi hai aapne inn lines mein.....bahut khoob...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2010, 08:59:26 PM »
bhot khubsurat ehsaas Anand ji--
bhot umda
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2010, 11:36:32 PM »
Bahut khoob Anand Ji
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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2010, 11:43:32 PM »
aap sabo ka shukriya.......itne achchhe comments dekh ke to darr lagta hai ki kahi guman na ho jaye is baat ka....
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2010, 01:24:34 PM »
bahut badhiya he ananad ji..

bahut hi achha likha he jajbaton se sarabor sa..

likte rahiye~
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2010, 03:26:35 PM »
shukriya abhi tamrakar ji.....bahot bahot shukriya
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«Reply #8 on: December 14, 2010, 03:41:29 PM »
man gaye janaab aapko...bht khubb rachna hai ye aapki sply last kuch lines bht pasand aaye mujhe......
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«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2010, 03:52:07 PM »
ek baar fir tahedil se shukragujaar hu aaplogo ka ki aapne meri har kavita ko meri rachna ko tareef ke layak samjha...........
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