kaise ye bataye..kitna chahate hain tumhe...

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kitna chahate hain tumhe..kaise ye botaye
darte hain soch ke , kahi  ap na bodal jaye

har dua me mangte he apki khusia,ap hi he mere dil pe chaye
jaha bhi jate hain karte hain apki baatein..
subhe saam rehete ho har pal.. kaise hum apko botaye

apki  muskan jaise chote bache ki pyare hato se agaya he
apka chand sa mukhda hamesa mera mann lubhaye

apki wo mithi mithi batein..jaise mere kano me pyar ka raag barsaye

apki har ada itni he pyari..ap ki jitni bhi tarif karu mere mann ko ye na lubhaye

bahat chahate hain apko..par botanahi paye..
ankho ankho ki gupchup baat kash ap samajh jaye....

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«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2009, 11:49:20 PM »

kitna chahate hain tumhe..kaise ye botaye
darte hain soch ke , kahi  ap na bodal jaye

har dua me mangte he apki khusia,ap hi he mere dil pe chaye
jaha bhi jate hain karte hain apki baatein..
subhe saam rehete ho har pal.. kaise hum apko botaye

apki  muskan jaise chote bache ki pyare hato se agaya he
apka chand sa mukhda hamesa mera mann lubhaye

apki wo mithi mithi batein..jaise mere kano me pyar ka raag barsaye

apki har ada itni he pyari..ap ki jitni bhi tarif karu mere mann ko ye na lubhaye

bahat chahate hain apko..par botanahi paye..
ankho ankho ki gupchup baat kash ap samajh jaye....



bahot khoob anny ji......acha likha apne....but u posted in wrong forum. neway welcome to yoindia.

chahat ka tu apni ikrar to kar
na badlenge hum kabhi aitbaar to kar

khushiyon ke pal khud hi dhund lenge humko
khuda se tu milne ki faryaad to kar

yaadon me subah shaam guzari hain bahot tumne
bahon me hamari kabhi shaam to kar

dekhna chahte hain hum bhi tumhe chahat hai kitni
beth kar mere ru ba ru yeh ankhen chaar to kar.


samir"dilse"
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2009, 11:59:57 PM »
Bahut khoob Anny ji and Samir ji,very beautiful creation.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 26, 2009, 12:02:57 AM »
thanks madhu ji............
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«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2009, 12:38:48 PM »
hey thanks a lot guys..Samir ji can u tel me where to post poems exactly..as m new to here
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«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2009, 12:44:05 PM »
You have to post your poem as per its type, taste or nature. You can choose the category in drop down menu while posting the same. Thanks. However, your poem is very nice and effective and also of Samir Bhai.
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«Reply #6 on: November 26, 2009, 09:11:41 PM »
Bahut Khub Anny JI And Good Response Samir JI Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2009, 09:14:35 PM »
hey thanks a lot guys..Samir ji can u tel me where to post poems exactly..as m new to here

Anny Ji Jaha Aapne Ye Shayari Send KI Thi Wahi Pe Sare Option The Aapko choose Karna Hoga Ki Aapki Shayari Ki Type Ki Hai Jaise Agar Ishq Pe Likhi hai To choose Kumar E Ishq agar dard pe likhi hai to shayari of dard agar dosti pe likhi hai to shayari of frndship agar zindagi pe likhi hai to shayari of zindagi wha bahut se option hai jinhe apni likhi huvi shayari gazals aur etc ke liye choose kar skte hai Ok anny Ji agar Samjh na aaya ho to dobara puch skte hai
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«Reply #8 on: November 27, 2009, 01:23:44 AM »
thanks all of u................


anny ji riyaz bhai aur rishi ji ne bakhoobi samjha diya hai...
if u have any doubt then feel free to ask.

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keep writing.
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