Zindagi ka Unwaan By Samir Parimal

by samir parimal on July 19, 2013, 11:58:23 PM
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हर धड़कते दिल में इक तूफ़ान होना चाहिए,
ज़िन्दगी का कोई तो उन्वान होना चाहिए।
 हक़ ख़ुदाई पर तेरा है, मानते हैं हम मगर,
अपने हिस्से भी कोई भगवान होना चाहिए।
 हर घड़ी हर पल ही बनता जा रहा है जानवर,
आदमी को भी कभी इंसान होना चाहिए।
 शायरी में यूँ असर आता नहीं, समझो मियां,
इश्क़ में पहले तुम्हें क़ुर्बान होना चाहिए।
 नफरतों के इस जहां में जब अमन की बात हो,
हर तरफ चर्चा-ए-हिन्दोस्तान होना चाहिए।
 पुरखतर राहों पे 'परिमल' चल पड़ा तो क्या हुआ?
साथ तेरे दीन और ईमान होना चाहिए।

 सप्रेम....
 : समीर परिमल
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«Reply #1 on: July 20, 2013, 01:14:47 AM »
very very nice , parimal ji.
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«Reply #2 on: July 20, 2013, 01:17:42 AM »
bahut ahche saaheb, bahut ahchi kaavish rahi meri, taraf se dili daad aur ek rau qubool farmaayeN....!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 20, 2013, 02:16:45 AM »
बहुत उम्दा
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«Reply #4 on: July 20, 2013, 09:51:44 AM »
ek rau ke saath daad qubool keeje
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«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2013, 11:43:54 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob... dheron daaaaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2013, 07:14:14 PM »
very nice
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2013, 11:27:13 PM »
   पुरखतर राहों पे 'परिमल' चल पड़ा तो क्या हुआ?
   साथ तेरे दीन और ईमान होना चाहिए।
Waah  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2013, 01:17:03 PM »
Congratulations,

Your work has been featured in "Aug 2013 Yoindia Shayariadab Newsletter". We hope you will continue to grace this Bazm with your beautiful words always. Comments and feedback is appreciated.
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