asi oh dive:

by lovely_nancy on January 28, 2010, 10:33:38 PM
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please comment and suggest
improvement:

Asi oh dive aa jihnu jinni zarurat c ohna jalagae
Matlab nikal de hi fuk marke bhuja gae
Dhoke ta bahut hunde aaye ne mere naal
Par fer v kade kise da bura nahi chaeya
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2010, 02:10:15 PM »
Nancy Ji Mein Aap Ko suggest To Nahi Kar Sakta Kyu Ki Mujhe Punjabi Thodi Thodi Hi Samjh Aati Hai Bus Wording Mein Kuch Khash Nazar Aata Hai To Comment Kar Deta Hu Bus Aap Apne Dil se likho Bus Keep Writing

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