behnde paani

by nikki on August 16, 2006, 08:17:30 PM
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assin tan behnde paniya varge
saada koi kinara na
jisne saanu rok liya apne hath di bukk vich
assin usde ho gaye
nahi tan saada koi dar_dawara na

tu ik nazar bhar ke vekh liya ena hi kaafi hai
poori zindagi jeen layi
nahi tan saada zinda rehna....takdeer nu vi gawara na
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2006, 05:35:54 AM »
Bhut kamaal da likheya hai nikki ji

Assi vehnde pani warge
sada koi than thikana na
jis passe ruk ho jaye
assi chalno kade talde na
na kismat sadi da vaali-waris
na zind sadi di koi pehchan
assi tutte birk de patte vangu
heeriye!Tere bin sada sarda na...!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2006, 04:34:07 PM »
thank u so much n too good T_R ji...

behnde paniyan te yaqeen na kar
eh kade iss nadi kade uss dariya
ehna ne kade rukna nahi
ehna naal akhiyan chaar na karin
nahi tan akhan vichon paniyan ne mukna nahi
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2006, 04:41:00 PM »
bahoot hi khoob TR and nikki ji...
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nikki
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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2006, 04:01:19 PM »
thank u so much Pooja sis....

hun ess paani ne beh jaana
fer saada naam vi iss duniya te nahi reh jaana
mere jaan ton baad mainu yaad na karin mere mehrama
kyonki fer yaad karan layi kujh vi nahi reh jaana
assin apna samaan tere dil de muhalle chon lai chale aa
tu khush rahein saari umr...tainu kisse hor da keh chale aa
shayad mera pyar enna khudgarz nahi si
jo tainu kise hor ton kho lainda
oh dil kade pyar kar hi nahi sakda
jehda kisse ton usda pyar kho lainda
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Style_guru
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«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2006, 02:00:27 PM »
The Style Guru Says.....


Bhot vadiya likhya si Nikki Ji!!!


Arz Kitta si,

Aaj dil di kehn nu ji karda,
Tere dil vich rehn nu ji karda,

Khushian de ke tainu,
Tere dard sehn nu ji karda,

Rab jaane tera mera ki rishta,
Bas tainu apna kehn nu ji karda.....


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nikki
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2006, 04:52:12 PM »
superbbb Style guru ji...n thank u so much

mainu meriyan haneriya ch rehan de
tu apna rah na bhul
kayi langhe ne es rah ton...koi mere layi rukiya nahi
tainu mere ch ki dikhiya..
tu apni manzil bhul mere kol aake beh giyan
pata nahi kede kum chaliya si..hun mere dukh vadaan joga reh giya
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2008, 11:20:19 AM »
assin tan behnde paniya varge
saada koi kinara na
jisne saanu rok liya apne hath di bukk vich
assin usde ho gaye
nahi tan saada koi dar_dawara na

tu ik nazar bhar ke vekh liya ena hi kaafi hai
poori zindagi jeen layi
nahi tan saada zinda rehna....takdeer nu vi gawara na


bahut khooob!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #8 on: March 24, 2008, 06:37:31 PM »
thank u so much Khwaish ...

main dukhan te thokran de sagar vall rukh kitta si
par iss gall di mainu khabar nahi si

hawa mainu modan di koshish kardi rahi
har kinara mainu kujh kehnda riha

par mera bhola mann tez gati(speed) naal behnda riha
jadon thokar laggi tan mehsoos hoiya
eh tan rah hi galat si...jisnu main apni zindagi di manzil kehnda riha
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: March 24, 2008, 06:39:44 PM »
wah nikki ki gal hai... bada hi sohna likhia hai!!
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nikki
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«Reply #10 on: March 24, 2008, 06:49:57 PM »
Hello n thank u so much sis....

main dil de mandir ch pyar da diva baal ke
behnde paaniya ch chadd ditta
haneriyan apna zor vikhaya
tufaan ne vi kujh ghutt nahi kiti

par eh har haalat ch jugda riha
jadon dilbar ne iss vall vekh ke issnu pehchaniya vi nahi
tan eh kujh hairaan jiha reh giya

usdi akh da kujh eho jiha ishara takiya ess ne
na tan eh bhujhan di himmat kar sakiya na hi vichara jagan joga reh giya
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: March 24, 2008, 06:51:56 PM »
wowow good one dear!!
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nikki
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«Reply #12 on: March 24, 2008, 07:01:03 PM »
thank u sis

har shaye iss duniya di mukk jaani
beh jaana tera naam nishaan bandiya

na teri nafrat ne kujh kar sakna
na mere tajarbe hi kum aane ne

eh tan ghadi do ghadi de lekhe ne
jo zindagi de naal hi mukk jaane ne

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«Reply #13 on: March 24, 2008, 07:03:47 PM »
Niks

chaa gaye buddy !

Too good ! Applause
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«Reply #14 on: March 24, 2008, 07:04:23 PM »
thank u sis

har shaye iss duniya di mukk jaani
beh jaana tera naam nishaan bandiya

na teri nafrat ne kujh kar sakna
na mere tajarbe hi kum aane ne

eh tan ghadi do ghadi de lekhe ne
jo zindagi de naal hi mukk jaane ne



BAHUT KHOOB NIKKi... Applause  Applause
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