Dhadkana nu Khatt ....

by Naya_Daur on July 12, 2006, 04:24:52 AM
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Naya_Daur
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kara intezar kyon main tera vairne
hoka raatan nu uth uth kyun lawa

ki kasoor hai  mera mehrma
adh vichale kinjh hath chad jawa

laya dil gulab nal,kaande kyun naseeb aaye
tu ek var je kawe,enna utte v ajj chal jawa

ajj puche tenu JEET sawal kuch adhure
gillian akhian nal eh dhadkana nu khaat sunawa
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«Reply #1 on: July 12, 2006, 04:47:22 AM »
bahot hi vadiya likhia hai... magar punjabi kuch jayada hi gahari ho gai mere liye sad5

Her ek lafaz khat ban gaya
her khat ek dhadkan ban gaya
dhadkano ne kari jab bhi dhadkano se baat
ek aor khawab dil mai saj gaya....

badi koshish ki punjabi mai likhu... magar kuch bana nahi....
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #2 on: July 12, 2006, 05:05:47 AM »
koi baat nahi ji....aapne pasand kiya aor bhut achha reply kiya .. wohi kafi hai ...
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strange
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«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2006, 03:44:42 AM »
Bahot Sohna likhia hai Jeet  ji and Pankhuri Ji..............keep it up
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2006, 05:55:28 AM »
thanks Strange .... :D
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nikki
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2006, 08:53:44 PM »
too good Jeet n Pankhuri sis....

dil di soch ajj sajna de dil de chubare ja baithi
ohna di yaad ajj fer dil mere vich dera la baithi
sochdi han ajj ohna de dil diya dhadkna nu ik khatt likhan
apne dil da haal..te apniya akhiyan de supniya nu karke sach likhan
oh vi jaan lave mere dil de raaz..main kuch eho jiha motiyan naal piroiya khatt likhan
jo kehna chahndi si chiran ton
oh gall main ajj apne dil chon kadd likhan
shayad oh samajh jave mere dil di ramaz..
usnu eho jihe pyar ch duboye lafz likhan
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2006, 05:08:48 PM »
thanks nikki and good job dear
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2006, 01:46:41 PM »
thanks & very nice post  nikki
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nikki
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2006, 01:53:58 PM »
thank u Jeet..tussi kujh nahi likhiya?

ajj fer apne dukhan nu khatt likhan lagi aa
apne dil de bhed kagaj te kadh likhan laggi aa
shayad taras aa jaye rab nu mere haal te
main kuch eho jahe lafz likhan laggi aa

mere maalka mera kasoor ki hai
chahndi haan har kisse da bhala
fer mere naal bura hunda kayon hai
main jisnu apna samjhdi haan
oh lod pain_te door ja ke khalonda kyon hai
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umraan
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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2009, 10:03:36 AM »
BAHUT HI SOHNA LIKHA HAI PANKHURI TE NIKKI JI..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause


OHDE SAARE KHAT MAI ANJUAAN NAAL BHIJAA BETHI AA,
IS MAADE DARD NAAL DIL NU PATHER BNA BETHI AA,


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«Reply #10 on: November 21, 2014, 02:51:24 AM »
Eh khatt hanjua di siyahi naal likhiya e.
Padh lavi ek baar apna dil e haal dasiya e.

Puch lendi ek baar ki e haal mera tare vajo.
Tari yaad vich raata jaag jaag langiya e.



Bohat khusurat likhiya tusi waaaaahhhhh
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