Dukh pyar da

by Bhupi ubhi on August 18, 2009, 03:47:00 PM
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Bhupi ubhi
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Main hamesha usnu apna smjhea hai par usne mainu bhut dukh dite ne ona dukha nu v hass k sehan kita e bean krn lga han shayri de through . . . .

Asi har dukh nu hass k jarya hai ,
har kagaz khoon nal bharya hai ,
bhave bhut gujian sattan mar gae ne ,
tan v sabr da ghut asi bharya hai ,
asi har dukh nu . . . . . .

Pyar main dilo krda c ,
vichadan to v darda c,
yad krke o gallan pyar dian ,
kai vari mera mann bharya hai ,
tan v sabr da ghut asi bharya hai ,
asi har dukh nu . . . . . .

Hun jad v likhan main lagda han ,
apni kalan nal kashamkash krda han,
aj thak k o v ron lagi ,
ve dus kina k hor kujh jarya hai Huh?
Kine k kandean te tu pab dharya hai Huh?
Tan v sabr da ghut bharya hai ,
 asi har dukh . . . . . . . .

Aj kagaz v mainu tana mare ,
meri hik te kharoch k nve geet ukare ,
har var lahu - luhan tu mainu krya hai ,
asi eda mehna v jarya hai ,
tan v sabr da ghut . . .
Asi har dukh . . . . . . . . .

Oh "BHUPI" hun mar chuka ,
jisne zindgi tere nal bitaun da wada krya hai ,
hun es pathar nu fark nai koi jit janda ya marya hai ,
jisne har dukh - sukh vich mera sath dita ,
os kagaz kalam ne v passa krya e ,
tan v sabr da ghut asi bharya hai ,
asi har dukh nu hass k jarya hai .
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deepzirvi
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2009, 04:25:07 PM »
ਨਾਮ ਅੱਜ ਵੀ ਮੇਰਾ ਓਹੀ ਹੇ....
ਘਰ ਸ਼ਹਿਰ ਸਭ ਓਹੀ ਨੇ ....
ਪਰ ਓਸ ਘਰ ਵਿਚ ਰਹਿਣ ਵਾਲਾ "ਮੈਂ" ਬਦਲ ਗਿਆ ਹਾਂ........

ਮਨਿਆਂ ਸੀ ਜਿਹਨੂੰ ਰੱਬ ਕਦੇ....
ਓਹੀ ਮੇਰਾ ਪਿਆਰ ਹੇ ਤੇ ਓਹੀ ਰਹੂਗਾ ....
ਪਰ ਓਸ ਰੱਬ ਦੀ ਪੂਜਾ ਕਰਨ ਵਾਲਾ "ਮੈਂ" ਬਦਲ ਗਿਆ ਹਾਂ.
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: August 19, 2009, 06:03:42 AM »
Bahut khoob Bhupi ji,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
Deepzirvi ji aapke lines mujhe samajh mein nahi aayee.
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: August 19, 2009, 02:00:03 PM »
Wah Bahut acche Bhupi ji... Welcome to Yoindia
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: August 19, 2009, 02:01:16 PM »
ਨਾਮ ਅੱਜ ਵੀ ਮੇਰਾ ਓਹੀ ਹੇ....
ਘਰ ਸ਼ਹਿਰ ਸਭ ਓਹੀ ਨੇ ....
ਪਰ ਓਸ ਘਰ ਵਿਚ ਰਹਿਣ ਵਾਲਾ "ਮੈਂ" ਬਦਲ ਗਿਆ ਹਾਂ........

ਮਨਿਆਂ ਸੀ ਜਿਹਨੂੰ ਰੱਬ ਕਦੇ....
ਓਹੀ ਮੇਰਾ ਪਿਆਰ ਹੇ ਤੇ ਓਹੀ ਰਹੂਗਾ ....
ਪਰ ਓਸ ਰੱਬ ਦੀ ਪੂਜਾ ਕਰਨ ਵਾਲਾ "ਮੈਂ" ਬਦਲ ਗਿਆ ਹਾਂ.

Unable to read Punjabi letters. Deep ji Can you please write in english
so that I can read and enjoy.
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Sammual
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«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2009, 04:02:14 PM »
Very Nice Ubhi Ji.
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Sammual
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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2009, 04:03:52 PM »
ਨਾਮ ਅੱਜ ਵੀ ਮੇਰਾ ਓਹੀ ਹੇ....
ਘਰ ਸ਼ਹਿਰ ਸਭ ਓਹੀ ਨੇ ....
ਪਰ ਓਸ ਘਰ ਵਿਚ ਰਹਿਣ ਵਾਲਾ "ਮੈਂ" ਬਦਲ ਗਿਆ ਹਾਂ........

ਮਨਿਆਂ ਸੀ ਜਿਹਨੂੰ ਰੱਬ ਕਦੇ....
ਓਹੀ ਮੇਰਾ ਪਿਆਰ ਹੇ ਤੇ ਓਹੀ ਰਹੂਗਾ ....
ਪਰ ਓਸ ਰੱਬ ਦੀ ਪੂਜਾ ਕਰਨ ਵਾਲਾ "ਮੈਂ" ਬਦਲ ਗਿਆ ਹਾਂ.




Bahut Khoob Bahut Hi Wadhiya Likhai Hai Deep Ji. Applause
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special
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2009, 11:24:30 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause

this is your wonderful creation bhupinder

i really like it

mein tuhadiya bahut sariya creations suniya ne
and all are fantastic

tusi bahut acha ganna vi gande ho

mein tuhadiya hor vi bahut sariya creations sunna chahagi

i know tusi aapni har creation dilo likhde ho
te eh kise nu dedicated hundi hai

tuhadi har creation vich ik dard hunda hai, jad vi tusi sad hunde ho ta dard kalam naal kore kagaz te likh dinde ho

te jad khush hunde ho ta vi bahut vadiya creations likhde ho

i want to advise you one thing that you must publish your book

all the best for your future  love4

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2009, 03:50:08 PM »
Just unputdownlable
Your creations are really that good
shukr hai ko punjabi vich bhi likhan da hai yahaan par

Applause Applause ApplauseApplause Applause Applause
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #9 on: September 11, 2009, 05:47:39 PM »
bahut bahut bahut acche ..tooooo good ..main ena wadiya kadae nahi padhya..bahut dukh bharya likhya hai tusi... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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