ik c pyar purana

by mandeepsingh on August 06, 2009, 02:08:56 PM
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mandeepsingh
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Ik c pyar purana,
jo labya ni mudke dobara..
daru de nashe ch raat langdi,
ohdi yaad ch din saara...
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2009, 02:09:37 PM »
Wah

Bahut khoob ! Applause
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2009, 02:11:51 PM »
Waah mandeep Ji Waah Waah !
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mandeepsingh
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2009, 02:14:50 PM »
thank u rajbir g, i m very new to write poetry
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mandeepsingh
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2009, 02:17:37 PM »
sophi g bahut bahut thanwaad, feed back layi
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HumTum
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2009, 02:28:22 PM »
Arre waah Mandeep Jii ... bahut vadiya likheya ...

Apna Yaar bhulana sokha nai hunda
Hadiya da balan laona sokha nai hunda
Mar jande ne lakha ranjhe ithhe
Duniya Vich pyaar nhibana sokha nai hunda !!


Regards,

HT
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mandeepsingh
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2009, 02:30:41 PM »
thank u, humtum... i wanna to knw ur name
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HumTum
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2009, 02:39:28 PM »
Mandeep Jii..

Taviit bna kar apne gal vich paa lai menu
Ya Fer Kitab vich phol wangu chupa lai menu
Mein dariya haan, mein moti haan, te pathar vi
Jehda marzi naam le ke bulaa lai menu !!


Regards,

HT
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2009, 02:03:21 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Mandeep ji and Hum Tum ji, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:wonderfulcreation.
 
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Nadaan Alone
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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2009, 04:54:13 AM »
hmmmmm....ajkal apni zidnagi da haal kuch is tarah da hi hai dost ....khair acha likhia hai ...
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #10 on: September 28, 2009, 05:47:27 PM »
good Applause
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