Ik pal v nhi c guzarda

by lovely_nancy on January 29, 2010, 01:12:35 AM
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jihnu vekhe bigaer ik pal v nhi c guzarda,
ohnu rab ne sade toh kho leya,
jihnu c asi mangde rab toh har dua vich,
oh hoe aaj begaane ne,
kinu pata c eh din v vekhna pena,
jehde naal c chaunde sari zindagi katni,
ohdo toh begair guzarni peh jani eh
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2010, 02:11:49 PM »
Nice Nancy JI
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