Ishq da jaal.........

by Gurpreet singh longia on November 15, 2012, 01:25:46 AM
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Chann nalo sohni ik mutiyar si
jidhe naina vich ik nashili taar si
usde naina de teer vich seene a vaj gae
uddn to hi mittar-pyare ishq de jaal vich fs gae.!!!!


Main apne nu rokya bthera mittro
par lga jive oh dil lutt ke le gai
eh ta dast-u-re ishq hai mittro
aj ohi kurhi meri heer bande-bande reh gai.!!!!!!!!!!
    
                        by...............Gurpreet singh longia
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«Reply #1 on: November 15, 2012, 04:06:55 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #2 on: November 15, 2012, 11:39:09 AM »
nice one...
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«Reply #3 on: November 15, 2012, 01:37:47 PM »
 happy3 thank u aqsh and thank u nandbahu sir.!!!!!! Bahut bahut shukriya apka.!!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: November 15, 2012, 03:58:48 PM »
Nice lines..
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«Reply #5 on: November 16, 2012, 01:08:09 AM »
 happy3 thank u saavan sir.!!!!! Thank u very much.!!!!!
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