Zindagi de Fasaane

by lalit.sharma83 on February 19, 2009, 03:07:36 PM
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Dill vich dard te Bullan te taraane,
E hi hai yaara meri zindagi de fasaane,

Aisa ki kasoor methon hoya mere Malaka,
Khushiyan da palla jo tu khoya methon Malka,

Nahi gam hun saanu kise v gam da,
Ehna gamaan ne saanu jeena sikha ditta,

Oye sadd ke jaaiye ehna dukhaan de yaara,
Jinna saanu shaunk likhan da paa ditta,

Kehnde kalam osdi hi chaldi hai, Jihde te Khuda meharbaan hove,
Har ik de vas daa nahi hunda likhna gauna,
Bhaavein jithe da vi oh Sultaan hove,
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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2009, 12:42:28 PM »
Dill vich dard te Bullan te taraane,
E hi hai yaara meri zindagi de fasaane,

Aisa ki kasoor methon hoya mere Malaka,
Khushiyan da palla jo tu khoya methon Malka,

Nahi gam hun saanu kise v gam da,
Ehna gamaan ne saanu jeena sikha ditta,

Oye sadd ke jaaiye ehna dukhaan de yaara,
Jinna saanu shaunk likhan da paa ditta,

Kehnde kalam osdi hi chaldi hai, Jihde te Khuda meharbaan hove,
Har ik de vas daa nahi hunda likhna gauna,
Bhaavein jithe da vi oh Sultaan hove,


Lalit Ji, mujhe punjabi achchi tarah to nahin aati par aapki ye shayari maine kai baar padhi aur samajhne ki koshish ki....aur jitna samajh aaya, behtareen likha hai aapne.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 20, 2009, 02:28:26 PM »
Dear Celmira,

First of all, mera honsla badhane ke liye bahot-2 shukriya.
See the translation of the same poem mentioned below respectively:

Dill me dard aur Hothon pe taraane,
Yehi hai Dost meri zindagi ke fasaane,

Aisa kya kasoor mujh se hua mere Maalik,
Khushiyon ka daaman jo tune chheena mere Maalik,

Nahi gam ab hume kisi bhi gam ka,
IN gamOn ne hume jeena sikha diya,

Mai vaare jaoon in dukhon pe Dost,
Jinhone hume shaunk likhne ka laga diya,

Kehte hein kalam uski hi chalti hai, Jispe Khuda meharbaan ho,
Har ek k bas ki baat nahi likhna aur gaana,
Chaahe kahin ka bhi woh Sultaan ho!

I hope now it would be easy for all my friends who has difficulty in understanding Punjabi...

Have a nice day!
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«Reply #3 on: February 20, 2009, 02:40:17 PM »
Nice One Lalit JI,.
Yunhi Likhte rahiye,.
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2009, 05:47:05 AM »
Dill vich dard te Bullan te taraane,
E hi hai yaara meri zindagi de fasaane,

Aisa ki kasoor methon hoya mere Malaka,
Khushiyan da palla jo tu khoya methon Malka,

Nahi gam hun saanu kise v gam da,
Ehna gamaan ne saanu jeena sikha ditta,

Oye sadd ke jaaiye ehna dukhaan de yaara,
Jinna saanu shaunk likhan da paa ditta,

Kehnde kalam osdi hi chaldi hai, Jihde te Khuda meharbaan hove,
Har ik de vas daa nahi hunda likhna gauna,
Bhaavein jithe da vi oh Sultaan hove,


Bahut Bahut Vadhiya Lalit Paaji..Ek-Ek Gal,Dil Te Vaji hai..Bahut Bahut Khoob...yuhi Likhde reha Karo.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2009, 05:49:20 AM »
Dill vich dard te Bullan te taraane,
E hi hai yaara meri zindagi de fasaane,

Aisa ki kasoor methon hoya mere Malaka,
Khushiyan da palla jo tu khoya methon Malka,

Nahi gam hun saanu kise v gam da,
Ehna gamaan ne saanu jeena sikha ditta,

Oye sadd ke jaaiye ehna dukhaan de yaara,
Jinna saanu shaunk likhan da paa ditta,

Kehnde kalam osdi hi chaldi hai, Jihde te Khuda meharbaan hove,
Har ik de vas daa nahi hunda likhna gauna,
Bhaavein jithe da vi oh Sultaan hove,


nice lalit..
kaafi kuch words samajh me to nahi aaye par phir bhi jitna samajh me ayaa...accha laga..
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«Reply #6 on: March 09, 2009, 09:49:22 AM »
kinna changa ikhya h tusi....kehnde h j dil vich dard
hove ta onu kagaj te utar lo ya kise de nal vand lo...ek gal aankha
j tusi gma de nal jina sikh gye ho ta tusi khushiya nu v lab sakde
ho.changa ji....
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«Reply #7 on: March 09, 2009, 12:03:52 PM »
Mere Dosto,
Mera honsla vadhaun vaaste bahot-2 shukriya. Koshish karaange ke kuj hor Dil diyaan gallan to kalam raahin tohaade naal sanjhiyan kariye.

"Log kehte hain, zinda rahe to phir milenge,
 Hum sochte hain, Milte rahe to Zinda rahenge"

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