Zindgi badi hi tedi kheer hai...........

by rajrishi on September 04, 2011, 01:55:32 PM
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Zindgi badi hi tedi kheer hai,
Par hausle di hundi jit akheer hai...

Jo kuch v tere naal hoyea oh teri majboori si,
Par na bhuli tere hathan vich hi teri takdeer hai...

Chhad rona, Rakh hausla agge vadh jara,
Vekh zindgi di kinni sohni tasveer hai...

'Rishie' sari duniya diyan akhan vich pani ae,
Kite khushi de hanju ne, kite gamman da neer hai.....
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2011, 11:36:59 PM »
Kii kehne rajrishi jee...

Vada hi changa kahendiya hai tusi...
kuch aur v sher likhte da to tuhadi gazal puri ho jandi.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2011, 01:12:48 PM »
Zindgi badi hi tedi kheer hai,
Par hausle di hundi jit akheer hai...

Jo kuch v tere naal hoyea oh teri majboori si,
Par na bhuli tere hathan vich hi teri takdeer hai...

Chhad rona, Rakh hausla agge vadh jara,
Vekh zindgi di kinni sohni tasveer hai...

'Rishie' sari duniya diyan akhan vich pani ae,
Kite khushi de hanju ne, kite gamman da neer hai.....



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Bahut Bahut Khoob Rishi Ji..

Asaan Jehe Lafzan Vich Gehre Jaabaatan Likh Haye ho..

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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2011, 01:18:21 PM »
Rajrishi ji
Bahut acche...Maja a gaya
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2011, 02:37:04 PM »
thx parwaaz, khwaish and mkv

parwaaz gazal ta puri likhi c par ethe do lines ghat reh gayia hun puraia kar dinda ha, hope u guys like it.....

Is pal nu tu khushiyan nal samet lai,
Enha palan di hi rehndi kol jageer hai.....
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2011, 02:43:46 PM »
Zindgi badi hi tedi kheer hai,
Par hausle di hundi jit akheer hai...

Jo kuch v tere naal hoyea oh teri majboori si,
Par na bhuli tere hathan vich hi teri takdeer hai...

Chhad rona, Rakh hausla agge vadh jara,
Vekh zindgi di kinni sohni tasveer hai...

'Rishie' sari duniya diyan akhan vich pani ae,
Kite khushi de hanju ne, kite gamman da neer hai.....



bahut acha likha hai raj aapne..thodi thodi punjabi samajh leti hoon


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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2011, 02:46:56 PM »
shukriya sheeba ji.....
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